I got a feel for a little of your passion in this piece. Always a good thing to feel a bit of the author in his work. It's just like a painter''s signature on one of their paintings. If there is no signature, you still have a great idea who painted the piece. You read enough of me, you will see what I mean!
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
you are a true detective my friend ,thanks
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This reminds me of my wife and I because I often wondered if she fell in love with my poetry about her or just me I no longer wonder that because it was me and the poetry just helped it along very nice write wordman
Bill
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
the story behind this ,is a woman falls in love with a poet, and he`s writing about his memories
9 Years Ago
Pretty much what I do with all the poems I wrote for my wife and I'm the poet you hit my life in you.. read morePretty much what I do with all the poems I wrote for my wife and I'm the poet you hit my life in your poem
9 Years Ago
that's when you know you did a good write,when it touches someones heart
wm, There are unfortunate twists in the game of love in which the building blocks of a love are toppled like buildings in a tsunami. When that occurs there is often nothing left but the memories of when love still stood tall and proud. So we often cling to these memories like a lifesaver from a capsized boat, forgetting to consider the present truths. Very nicely done! take care...dan
People very often fall in love with the memory of a person, which could become problematic at times for, once that memory dies, you are facing the real person and then, he/she would seem a total stranger to you.
Your lines are beautiful.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
you are too kind,but I thank you for your visit
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It seems I keep coming back to reread this beautiful write. I am placing it in my favorites list..Valentine
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
lord sometimes I can write,thank you , if I come up missing you can find me at post poems . com read morelord sometimes I can write,thank you , if I come up missing you can find me at post poems . com
word_man
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Outstanding song and perfect poetry for the song. Easy to love a memory. Distance make the pain less painful and the memory more sweeter. I like and understand this poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry my friend.
Coyote
just ask, golden glove boxer years ago,us army veteran ,a contractor is how i make my living,
i am an amateur writer.. been here since june of 2013,couldn`t write then,still can`t.but who cares
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