You fell in love with a memory

You fell in love with a memory

A Poem by wordman
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You fell in love

with a memory

as you read my poetry

you read my heart


You saw right through me

right from the start

 you read my mind

you read my soul

I touched you,i know


You could feel the love

and you could feel my pain

from the words

my heart would bring


You fell in love

with a memory

wrote from my heart

for you, from me...

© 2017 wordman


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I got a feel for a little of your passion in this piece. Always a good thing to feel a bit of the author in his work. It's just like a painter''s signature on one of their paintings. If there is no signature, you still have a great idea who painted the piece. You read enough of me, you will see what I mean!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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This reminds me of my wife and I because I often wondered if she fell in love with my poetry about her or just me I no longer wonder that because it was me and the poetry just helped it along very nice write wordman

Bill

Posted 9 Years Ago


W R Stowe

9 Years Ago

you bet you
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wm, There are unfortunate twists in the game of love in which the building blocks of a love are toppled like buildings in a tsunami. When that occurs there is often nothing left but the memories of when love still stood tall and proud. So we often cling to these memories like a lifesaver from a capsized boat, forgetting to consider the present truths. Very nicely done! take care...dan

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

I appreciate your review dan
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People very often fall in love with the memory of a person, which could become problematic at times for, once that memory dies, you are facing the real person and then, he/she would seem a total stranger to you.
Your lines are beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

you are too kind,but I thank you for your visit
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It seems I keep coming back to reread this beautiful write. I am placing it in my favorites list..Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

lord sometimes I can write,thank you , if I come up missing you can find me at post poems . com
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Outstanding song and perfect poetry for the song. Easy to love a memory. Distance make the pain less painful and the memory more sweeter. I like and understand this poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry my friend.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

I thank you for reading
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
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This is terrific, you big teddy bear! This is really cool, I enjoyed reading this and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

and i appreciate your vist
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I'm still in love with a memory. Don't want it to ever go away.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

9 Years Ago

thank you for stopping by ,always stay in love
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This is a really really pretty poem :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

8 Years Ago

t k little, i sent it to the local sheriffs office for them to see if i can procecute his sorry a*s
Cool Girl

8 Years Ago

Oh.. Okay, I don't think TK likes me though. He and relic blocked me.. It makes me kind of sad :(
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