You fell in love with a memory

You fell in love with a memory

A Poem by wordman
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You fell in love

with a memory

as you read my poetry

you read my heart


You saw right through me

right from the start

 you read my mind

you read my soul

I touched you,i know


You could feel the love

and you could feel my pain

from the words

my heart would bring


You fell in love

with a memory

wrote from my heart

for you, from me...

© 2017 wordman


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I got a feel for a little of your passion in this piece. Always a good thing to feel a bit of the author in his work. It's just like a painter''s signature on one of their paintings. If there is no signature, you still have a great idea who painted the piece. You read enough of me, you will see what I mean!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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This was so very nicely penned. The theme is wonderful and you have managed to pull on those heartstrings with your words. Very cool.

Posted 6 Years Ago


 wordman

6 Years Ago

i really appreciate your visit,thank you
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A lovely romantic poem..deeply expressed and beautifully penned..

Posted 6 Years Ago


 wordman

6 Years Ago

my key board is going bad sorry
  Fran Marie

6 Years Ago

You're welcome...
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Gee
Nice wordman,another fine romantic write

Posted 6 Years Ago


 wordman

6 Years Ago

thank you ge for the visit
Gee

6 Years Ago

You're welcome
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Very beautiful, romantic longings that tugs on the heart.
I enjoyed the rhyming fluidity you've penned in this, very relatable
As well... thank you for sharing! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


ms. barrie

6 Years Ago

You're welcome, I look forward to reading more of your writes soon :)
 wordman

6 Years Ago

I have a open door and my light is always on
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i agree with Ana...damn, wordman, you shoot straight from the heart, no holes barred.

Posted 6 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

6 Years Ago

thanks Jacob, hell if your going to write make it beleivable
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That's so beautiful. Has a touch of sadness to it. No happy ending here but the love that is celebrated is very special. Very lovely.

Posted 6 Years Ago


 wordman

6 Years Ago

thank you ana
Matching Socks

6 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)
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Absolutely beautiful, Ron! Soft, tender and breathtaking ... I enjoyed your beautiful poem :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


 wordman

6 Years Ago

and I enjoy your beautiful reviews,thank you
Tiana

6 Years Ago

Always a pleasure, Ron :)) Have a wonderful Sunday ...
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