In Memory of Love

In memory of love

I take my pen in hand and I

let my emotions spill on to the canvas

Watch

as I paint a picture of pain and heartache

we are meant to be with one another

we fit together as one when we`re apart

so much pain and sorrow comes from the heart

I need your touch

your sweet kiss

it`s you babe,the one that I miss

so please come back home

don`t know how long my heart can hold on

I need you so much,and I always will

I cry each night when I go to bed

it`s the sleep that I dread cause when

I sleep I dream of you and the things

we used to do

You know darling

that I`m still in love with you

so tell me baby

that you love me too...

Reviews

[alf]

Hi wordman. Full of emotion!!! Great write, expressing the longing you feel to make things right!! Liked this a lot, alf

[RomaJ]

sometimes emotional pain can feel far worse than any physical ones.

Heartfelt and heart breaking. Lovely poem, Wordman

[Jen]

This is romantic and heartbreaking...
"it's the sleep I dread cause when I sleep I dream of you" love it! Lonely and Lovely! Samantha Sang it's been awhile since I've that one....perfect for this!

[h d e rushin]

You know i'm from Detroit Wordman...and yes, we still worship the Motown Sound. This reads
like one of those hard rhythm, tender lyric songs of the 1960's. Lovely..

dana

[Perkele.7885]

Wordman you are a romantic too! This is a very classy piece of one heart missing another. I like it very much.
I am confused by one line though!
we fit together as one when we`re apart
This is the line that threw me off. we fit together as one when we are apart
You are crying out for her to come home. How do you fit together when you are apart?

[B]

So beautiful

i like how it flows right to its bed

[Amy Rose]

This poem brings me to tears.

As young as I may be, I fell in love with a boy and he fell in love with me.
We spent a year together. Holding hands, making cute love notes for each other.

But not so long ago he broke up with me, because he found another girl.

This poem says exactly how I feel

I do cry each night when I go to bed, and all I dream about is him. All I want to hear from him is:

"I still love you"

Amazing poem.

[Kousika]

"I need your touch
your sweet kiss
it`s you babe,the one that I miss
so please come back home
don`t know how long my heart can hold on"
I loved these lines more and felt for your love ..
Superb work..

[Adam Adams]

"So please come back home... don`t know how long my heart can hold on... " Very romantic lines. The words're surprisingly nicely suited with the song. Romance's love, love.. a romance, when two spirits're met... rivers, the oceans and every sand of land starts sending blessings to romantic nights... to bringing love back to loved-spirits. Beautiful piece of art. Enjoyed reading it.

[Fran Marie]

It's always good to write the emotions out and express the pain we feel..and you did it well..nice work