In Memory of Love

In memory of love

I take my pen in hand and I

let my emotions spill on to the canvas

Watch

as I paint a picture of pain and heartache

we are meant to be with one another

we fit together as one when we`re apart

so much pain and sorrow comes from the heart

I need your touch

your sweet kiss

it`s you babe,the one that I miss

so please come back home

don`t know how long my heart can hold on

I need you so much,and I always will

I cry each night when I go to bed

it`s the sleep that I dread cause when

I sleep I dream of you and the things

we used to do

You know darling

that I`m still in love with you

so tell me baby

that you love me too...

Reviews

[Cassie]

I loved this one, wonderfully written and described

[Pryde Foltz]

A wonderful poem, Ron. Particularly fond of that first stanza:)

[AaronFreitas]

Hearing the words "I love you too" are maybe the most satisfying words anyone can tell you. I understand fully... good work!

[Sheila Kline]

Heartfelt expressions of love lost and yearning for it to return, and the song is a perfect accompaniment to feelings of such pathos.
Come back, Baby - yes come back and make it love more than a memory!

[sereenaoutloud]

Beautiful, a love lost and the feelings that don't just go away!

[Melinda McQueen]

So beautiful and beautifully written. It hurts to lose someone you love so deeply. The memories hang like a dark cloud.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So beautiful and the music is heavenly...Bravo wordman...:)...............

[Miss Sharon]

What a beautiful yet bittersweet poem Ron. If this is autobiographical...I pray she comes home and realizes what she is missing by having a loving man in her life. (Who writes romantic poetry!) ~SP

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful words for love.
"You know darling
that I`m still in love with you
so tell me baby
that you love me too..."
The poem described the dance and need for love. Love make us know we are still alive and human. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry my friend.
Coyote

[Helena]

Oh dear I am sorry if this is a personal poem. Such sorrow and longing for the one you love.

You penned the pain well!

~ Helena ~