Almost like a song

Almost like a song

A Poem by wordman
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I lie here every night,

wishing , i could hold you tight;

as your beauty echoes softly through my mind,

as my heart,you gently entwine.

 

I feel your presence by my side,

as you gently unfold in my mind;

as we make love,i feel your soft skin,

as it caresses mine.

 

It was almost like a song,

the orchestra gently playing ;

as our bodies dance along,

then i awake, with tears in my eyes.

 

When i roll over to hold you,

i realize,it was just a dream;

as you,

lay gentle on my mind...

,

© 2019 wordman


Author's Note

 wordman
2 nd place in any poetry contest

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A romantic song gently playing and caressing. To wake up is to realize the dream past. Nicely expressed dear Wordman.

Posted 6 Months Ago


"you gently caress my mind
as we make love i feel your soft skin"

Posted 6 Months Ago


"your beauty echoes softly
through my mind as my heart"

Posted 6 Months Ago


 wordman

6 Months Ago

thank you sami
Sami Khalil

6 Months Ago

You are welcome
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Rye
This is so wonderful I like the part of "as you lay gentle on my mind" makes me think of that song. I love music sorry about that. I guess that is why I love poetic writes. Awesome write!

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Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

don`t usually send r/r`s but this is one of my favorites,,thank you
Rye

1 Year Ago

no problem, I am wanting read request, sometimes it gives me inspiration, I love reading poems. No p.. read more
ah love it
reminds me of a james taylor song
in my mind I'm going to Carolina
cant you just feel the sunshine
love your work


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Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

love your reviews,thank you
as you lay gentle
on my mind...

A vivid and beautiful but alas wishful dream. How deeply felt the void!

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Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you very much
Very nice. Sweet dreaming . Lovely poem with seducive words. Just wonderful mood.

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Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thesong makes the poem sound even better,thank you
Your writings have a certain softness within them though they talk about lack and sadness. Enjoyed reading it big time. Thank you for sharing.

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Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

like my life i guess,sad and lacking,thank you
I enjoyed reading this poem, wordman. I could feel the emotion in your words here. Well done!

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Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

Thank you paul !
Aww this hurts just to read. Potent and striking diction and a very strong ending, great job!

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Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

i thank you for the visit !

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