Almost like a song

Almost like a song

A Poem by wordman
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I lie here every night,

wishing , i could hold you tight;

as your beauty echoes softly through my mind,

as my heart,you gently entwine.

 

I feel your presence by my side,

as you gently unfold in my mind;

as we make love,i feel your soft skin,

as it caresses mine.

 

It was almost like a song,

the orchestra gently playing ;

as our bodies dance along,

then i awake, with tears in my eyes.

 

When i roll over to hold you,

i realize,it was just a dream;

as you,

lay gentle on my mind...

,

© 2019 wordman


Author's Note

 wordman
2 nd place in any poetry contest

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WoW!!!
sir this is so beautiful..... romantic and sweet.. ...
absolutely loved it!!!
:)

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Posted 8 Years Ago


 wordman

8 Years Ago

i appreciate your visit my friend
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I like how the last line settles the poem. A very nice thought to have your lover wholly draped across one's mind.
Enjoyed the poetry. Interesting bio!

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 wordman

8 Years Ago

i appreciate your visit !
I may have to steal these words my friend... this is such a well thought out and perfect write. One of my fav's by you buddy! Great work

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 wordman

8 Years Ago

help your self ! thank you for the visit
These sweet and tender emotions. The poem provoked every gentle emotion in me. Thank you for sharing this fine piece.

Insight.

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 wordman

8 Years Ago

thank you for the visit,i appreciate it ~
Insight "MH"

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.
I like the soft tones of your poem. It's a whisper of melodies I've heard before. That stays in your heart and mind, long after we've awaken. Love and music intertwines. It moves you.
Very moving and touching poem.

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Posted 8 Years Ago


 wordman

8 Years Ago

thank you very much,glad to see you !
Each time I read over this I kept matching it to different tunes in my head. nice work

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Posted 8 Years Ago


 wordman

8 Years Ago

thank you for the visit !
Your words are gentle and powerful. But that shouldn't be a surprise considering your name is Wordman. I really like the last stanza. It resonates well. Thanks for sharing!

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 wordman

8 Years Ago

thank you for the visit !

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