Sweet Dreams

I go to bed,

with you, on my mind.

and i dream ,dream of,

what could have been mine.

sweet,sweet dreams,

i have of you!

but sweet dreams

is all i have of you.

sweet,sweet love

brought to my heart

from above

then put,to a poets pen

to fill my heart

with love,yet once again...

Reviews

[Purpleflower]

Hey Wordman.......awesome romantic ink.......dreams keep you deep inside your luvs hug thru the night.....very peaceful ink......purple luv & hugs xo :)

[wordman]

thank you,i am honered

[Zephyr]

Writing invokes feelings and your poem portrayed that perfectly.
A sweet and lovable poem.
Great work:)

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Zephyr]

My pleasure

[Paul]

Well written poem! I enjoyed the deeper meaning. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing!

[wordman]

thank`s for the visit paul,good to meet you !

[Paul]

Likewise! I look forward to reading more of your poetry!

[Najam Us Saher]

sweet,sweet dreams,
i have of you!
but sweet dreams
is all i have of you.
Very thoughtful lines. It shows that true feeling that you see her in your dreams but you only see in in your dreams. Beautifully written loved it.

[wordman]

thank you najam

[Najam Us Saher]

No need of thanks :)

[DIVYA]

sweet,sweet love
brought to my heart
from above

then put,to a poets pen
to fill my heart
with love,yet once again...

A beautifully penned poem with a deeper message. No love is in vain. The best ink flows from pain.

[wordman]

you can`t feel love without feeling pain,thank you for reading

[DIVYA]

I agree totally. You are most welcome!

[Pete]

The repetition of 'sweet' really brings out the feeling in this. Guess there are many different ways to love someone, even from afar. A nice heart-felt write for sure.

[wordman]

thank you pete,appreciate your review

[tanmay7551]

A poet's heart, love penned down, heart reunites with beloved within mind.

[wordman]

thank you for the review

[3X3MPLER]

great work, i like the flow and the simplicity

[wordman]

i like your review ..

[Deandra Dawn]

This is indeed sweet. It has the perfect flow and you take a breath at the exact right moment you should. Love it. Nicely done.

[wordman]

thank you for the kind words,i really appreciate it.

[Bo Lanier]

it's always good to read your stuff. nicely written.

[wordman]

thank you bo !