Sweet Dreams

I go to bed,

with you, on my mind.

and i dream ,dream of,

what could have been mine.

sweet,sweet dreams,

i have of you!

but sweet dreams

is all i have of you.

sweet,sweet love

brought to my heart

from above

then put,to a poets pen

to fill my heart

with love,yet once again...

Reviews

[Ruth]

Such a melancholic poise here wordman and a beautiful manner of expression...the pen is a companion at times...

[wordman]

thank you miss poppy

[Cyndy Robinson]

Sad with an upward sweep at the end. I like that. I tend to put punch lines at the end of mine. Maybe I need how to do an upward sweep. Just as poignant.

[wordman]

and i`m sure it would be a beautiful write ! thank you

[Einstein Noodle]

how we turn to the pen to let it all out ..let it go ...let it flow ...unrequited love :(( i like the plain language ... still capturing deep emotion that is certainly universal ... fine closing lines sir!

E.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit ! i appreciate it

[andrew mitchell]

Nice work wordman, this could be a song by America or bread. Very sweet! I hear poetsfreak if thats what its called is closing its site in june 2017 Check out "sweet sweet love" by Russell Morris. An Aussie legend, a great song!

[wordman]

thanks for the visit andrew,yes it is closing and i will check it out,i guess i can get him on you tube

[andrew mitchell]

yes you can

[andrew mitchell]

did you listen to that song i suggested

[wordman]

i did listen to it,and eagle wings,great musician

[Sami Khalil]

You should write song lyrics to Nashville. You are good at it. A beautiful one of yours...:).....................

[wordman]

thank you sami,appreciate the review

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......................

[annapearlsattic]

Took me to a past love that I dream of often. Wonder where he is.....thanks for the memories! Great poem!

[wordman]

he is probably thinking about you,thank`s

[annapearlsattic]

I hope so...that is a nice thought. I found out he was in my city just a few weeks back. I would have loved to catch a glimpse.

[Desert Rose]

can tell that you're quite head over heels here :)
Good job

[wordman]

just with you neo,thanks for the visit !

[Jesus & Gypsy Soul]

The second line kicked me in the heart. How sad. I really like your writing style. Reads like lyrics. Country or some classic rock. Thanks for sharing.

[wordman]

thank`s,i don`t know where this stuff comes from..

[Antoñyo]

A nice heartfelt piece that places the reader where the writer is rather well.
Thanks for sharing

[wordman]

thank you for the visit !

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You have a wonderfully romantic pen, sir :)

[wordman]

two for a dollar,thank you miss lynn