Windows Of Your Soul

I can look,

into your soul;

as i read,

the stories you hold.

 

Hold deep,

in your heart;

as you write,

your soul plays a part.

 

It reads,

like a movie script;

from long ago,

i love ,reading your soul.

 

You touch me,

in every word,

i feel the emotion,

coming from your heart

as your soul,plays it`s part...

Reviews

[Farmgirl]

I love this !!!

Its how I feel when I read the writings of others ...
We all have a story to tell and share with the world to those who are willing to take the time to listen or read of them..

I love this Wordman thank you for sending me this :')

[Farmgirl]

I still will never grow tired of reading it ..

[wordman]

this was the last poem i wrote for writers cafe
thank you for reading

[Farmgirl]

=) well its beautiful...

Just let the words flow wordman Believe in yourself more.. You are way more capable than I think you give yourself credit for ... You can write about anything ... Be inspired and get that pen out again :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ron the review below is him again. Check the url.

This piece is one I relate to as when reading some of the writing here it mesmerises and captures one with a web of emotions that draw you to the writer.

[wordman]

i know john,but it was such a nice review i hated to delete it,i have blocked him allready

[John Alexander McFadyen]

What a delight poem Ron, you continue to improve and impress.

[wordman]

thank you very much !

[Chris A Jones]

Reads like a love story that touches the soul. I can't imagine how you came up with this one. But it's a very moving play on words.

[wordman]

i have no idea where my mind was it when this one came along,

[Farmgirl]

Love this wordman! you are a very passionate writer.

[wordman]

thank you for dropping by..

[Farmgirl]

Thank you for giving me a reason to

[Willard Wells]

Very nice work. Great flow with motions of love.

[wordman]

thank you mr wells for the visit !

[Johnson Bobby]

thank you let me see that woman still see
us as soft and tender beings some times i have
to search for my feminimity

[wordman]

thank you for the visit !

[Ashish]

"And I will say, you are too smart,
To capture the reader's heart"

Thanks for sharing :)

[wordman]

thank you very much !

[Michael X]

smooth and lyrical! Gentle words that sway the reader, great job!

[wordman]

thank you michael !

[Sami Khalil]

"You touch me,
in every word,
i feel the emotion,
coming from your heart"

[wordman]

thank you sami,appreciate the visit

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......................

[tanmay7551]

For someone in love (first love) above lines will hit the core...

[tanmay7551]

What I meant was the choice of the title 'Windows of your soul' . Don't we all open our window for a brief period and allow love to flow in... especially the first time.... I believe after the first time if there is a failure then it turns out to be a shut door :)

[wordman]

love will always open that door,love is a key,it fits all locks..thank you for the review