my Cherie amour

my girl,

she is the girl of my dreams,

she is a dream come true

she is beautiful,

and she is smart,

built like a brick house

sometimes we talk for hours,

about nothing,and about everything,

we sit on the swing and just talk

i am so in love,

when she kisses me,

it sends shivers down my spine

her skin so soft,her breasts full,

her sweet lips kissing mine

i`m so proud that she is mine

and when we make love

i`m in heaven,she makes me,

feel like a man

i am so proud of her,

she is everything a man,

could ever want or need

and her love is mine...

Reviews

[DIVYA]

A very romantic write. I appreciate the pride and deep love expressed in your poetry.

[wordman]

isn`t that what love is about,,thank you

[Chase Dylan]

Built like a brick house... Love that line... Solidity in all aspects is quite important, hah... Emotionally heavy... Wonderfully penned...

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Chase Dylan]

Most welcome

[B]

A very romantic and endearing piece
keep up the good work

[wordman]

THANK YOU FOR THE VISIT

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Very romantic poem very good as always

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

No problem

[Einstein Noodle]

so many love songs ...i am singing them in my head forever today now ...i remember the moment that all those love songs "made sense" ... and we were on a swing also ... God bless you wordman ..i think its a sure thing your "woman" knows all those things you say about her ...a special chuckle for me in your "brick house" line
E.

[wordman]

thank you my friend,brings back memories for sure

[Relic]

A simple and to the point romantic poem Wordman. A pleasure to read.

[wordman]

thank you relic

[Relic]

Love the song too, always have. You're welcome.

[Priyanshi]

So sweet poem...so beautifully you penned your feeling for your love...it's great to read.

[wordman]

thank you for stopping by

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure, friend.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Very beautiful like twin flames
minds being one Very
Romantic this is how love should be.

[wordman]

thank you,good to see you

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're very welcome and it's good to see you also I'm visiting family in Iowa everything is out of the old apartment so I'm what you say separated I'm not depressed and sad anymore I'm staying far far away from anything to do with a relationship for a long time.

[wordman]

lol , don`t take long to learn does it.

[Ruth]

Delightful...that bond is like nothing else, the ultimate in blissful utopia :) Lovely piece wordman...

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[MCS]

a sweet and gentle read :)

[wordman]

thank you for the visit