Memories

Memories

A Poem by wordman



In the misty waters

of my mind,

i reminisce of the hallowed,

memories that i left behind.

 

Once as vivid

as night and day

now only misty memories

slowly fading away

 

Fading away

like a gentle breeze

on a summers day

but it seems everything fades away

 

Even those

hallowed memories

of me and you,and the feelings,

that we once knew...

© 2017 wordman


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Very nicely conveyed lines. Full of sentiment Ron. Like your choice of music too. Have a good weekend.

Chris

Posted 10 Months Ago


 wordman

10 Months Ago

thank you chris,you to..stopped by your page thursday
Beautiful read - beautiful words! 🌸

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you aubrey
This is such a wonderful, lovely write. I like this a lot

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you for reading
This is a beautifully written poem you have here. The flow is just perfect and honestly, I dont even mind the lowercase 'i's (although that might be a good change) the description really brings you to a journey in the back of your mind. A nostalgic, sad and kinda bitter memory we watch unfold in the crevests of your brain. Well done!

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you for the visit
Mommy you love me right? Love me harder then daddy will.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Saree Marcel

2 Years Ago

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I dont remember the details of each day...just the intensity of them. I dont remember what brought about the end..just the sorrow of it. I dont remember who fell in love first ....I just remember that it brings and smile to my heart. Love these words and feelings!

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

sweet words,thank you
However we try, can never recreate the moment which becomes a memory and after little longer fades away. Lovely short and sweet composition.
Sneh

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you for the visit,sometimes they last forever
So heart-touching and so very sincere.

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you dee
Having produced an epic poem known as Seasons of Black September then Shadow of Dys within my first collection -- I will give you some insight about the WritersCafe era before the poetry became more dominate here. During the era I first introduced the namesake roster -- two of them came from here as Tabloid Purposes IV a few also emerged here too. A lot of the writers have cult followings and seen a blind eye from the industry factions. If you never tried writing a short story, don't knock it. The piece you reviewed from the pastor was no poem but a narrative journal. Study anthology publications because that's been the print platform for short stories for years. I never published short poems in publications but seen an epic poem in the pages of a literary journal where two of them are in circulation. The reason one is a historic document; the publisher is an illustrator and an author himself. I gripe because way too many poets and not enough journalists.

Posted 2 Years Ago


UncleFossil

2 Years Ago

As you got to see Boycotting Truth -- I have a Gothic Horror story that's ranged in the top ten on W.. read more
 wordman

2 Years Ago

you should re post some here
UncleFossil

2 Years Ago

I am working as an advisory role for others who want to do controversial subject matter -- I invite .. read more
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I like how you described the memories as "fading away like a gentle breeze" because while it's sad it doesn't seem hopeless just something that happens to us and we accept it. So overall love the poem

Posted 3 Years Ago


 wordman

3 Years Ago

thank you for the visit

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