Memories

In the misty waters

of my mind,

i reminisce of the hallowed,

memories that i left behind.

 

Once as vivid

as night and day

now only misty memories

slowly fading away

 

Fading away

like a gentle breeze

on a summers day

but it seems everything fades away

 

Even those

hallowed memories

of me and you,and the feelings,

that we once knew...

Reviews

[Relic]

This is one of your best Wordman. I enjoyed the rhymes and the rhythm of this one very much.

Bravo!

[wordman]

appreciate your visit..

[Hannah]

Very well written. Memories can seem so nostalgic and beautiful, and you captured that here.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Feel of ancient times and ancient words. You made the reader feel and understand the emotions. The poem left the reader with the feeling of sadness. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

thaks john,turned out to be a sad write

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[shruthi]

Nice lines ...
Memories can't be erasable...well done poet

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[shruthi]

You are most Welcome

[Chris]

Strong and real... well said Wordman.

[wordman]

good to see you chris,,thanks

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Feelings grow old n cold but never forgotten. Thanks again for your wonderful poetry.

[wordman]

thank you for reading my junk

[ROXANE DORSEY]

no its not junk to this poetess. thanks

[Mrs Mania]

This poem is amazing. Honestly, my favorite kind of poetry. Sometimes, the moments you want to last forever, fade into memories. And the moments you wish you didn't remember, become your entire life.

[wordman]

thank you,glad you liked it

[Neville]

Although not my usual cup of tea, I liked this love poem of yours a lot, so full of pathos & pain. I imagine it must have hurt just writing it? Glad I found it wordman.........All Good Things, Neville

[wordman]

glad you found it to ! ,thank you

[Neville]

my pleasure entirely

[Mirror]

"Even those

hallowed memories

of me and you,and the feelings,

that we once knew..."

How sad to let go at times.

[Chris]

Poetic words dancing with a harrowing tone, I like it.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[wordman]

make a song out of it