With Out You

With Out You

A Poem by wordman



These words babe !

i write for you,

you know who you are,

you hung the moon,you created the stars

 

You captivated my heart,

your the only one i see,

it`s you babe,

your the only one for me.

 

You see,

true love paralyzes the mind,

there could never be another,

my heart is blind.

 

No matter where i look,

it`s you that i see,

can`t you see inside my soul,

can`t you see inside of me.

 

My heart,is like a volcano erupting inside,

without you babe im just a drop in the sand,

i love you always,

i will always`s be your man ...

© 2017 wordman


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Touching and lovely, Ron. I really enjoyed your words on this early Thursday morning:)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

thanks for the visit pryde
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Rye
...and ever so lovely write such beauty within your words.

Posted 10 Months Ago


 wordman

10 Months Ago

thank you again
I Can't Explain My After Reading Feelings In Words, Your Poetry And Its Lyrics Made My Day, And Every Line Touched My Heart Directly, "True Love Paralyzes The Mind" Is One Of The Best Line I Read About Love And Its A Bitter Truth. I Usually Don't Add Writings In My Library, I Am Here From Almost 3 Years And I Have Added Just 2 or 3 Writings Hardly In My Library But I Am Gonna Add This One, Thanks Sir For Such Lovely Representation of Love....

Posted 10 Months Ago


 wordman

10 Months Ago

thank you for reading
I mean.. how could we hate love with all these feelings and moods? this poem is amazing, Ron

Posted 11 Months Ago


 wordman

11 Months Ago

thank you for reading my humble work
I enjoy this one very much. It's direct and heartfelt. Is this an older or newer poem for you? It seems a little different than the others, a little more unique to you. I wonder, after reading your bio, do you ever write about boxing? Or use boxing imagery...that would be interesting. Thank you.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you for the review,never wrote about boxing or used any images.i don`t remember when i wrote i.. read more
Oh, wow...what woman wouldn’t want a charming man to write an “ode” to her and memories of her resilient beauty? Bravo, mister. Bravo! 👏🏼

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you for the visit
To be blessed by undying enduring love is a gift. One we should all recognize and wish for! Your Lady is truly blessed to have your love and your poetry!

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you for the visit,don`t share my poetry a lot
Your poems are like sweet songs of love, full of affections and passions, sometimes gentle, sometimes strong, they flow so nicely with a musical tune, thank You for sharing this, and may Love ever shine over You*

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you,you are kind
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Light

1 Year Ago

You are welcome my friend.
You Romantic Devil you capturing a heart of Gold.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you falcon

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just ask, golden glove boxer years ago,us army veteran ,a contractor is how i make my living, i am an amateur writer.. been here since june of 2013,couldn`t write then,still can`t.but who cares i .. more..

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