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With Out You

With Out You

A Poem by wordman



These words babe !

i write for you,

you know who you are,

you hung the moon,you created the stars

 

You captivated my heart,

your the only one i see,

it`s you babe,

your the only one for me.

 

You see,

true love paralyzes the mind,

there could never be another,

my heart is blind.

 

No matter where i look,

it`s you that i see,

can`t you see inside my soul,

can`t you see inside of me.

 

My heart,is like a volcano erupting inside,

without you babe im just a drop in the sand,

i love you always,

i will always`s be your man ...

© 2017 wordman


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Strong and wise words. Good work!

Posted 6 Months Ago


 wordman

6 Months Ago

thank you for the visit
I really like this. captures love fully

Posted 6 Months Ago


 wordman

6 Months Ago

thank you for the visit
Very nice and it certainly evokes memories of bygone romances!

Posted 7 Months Ago


 wordman

7 Months Ago

thank you for the review
Touching and lovely, Ron. I really enjoyed your words on this early Thursday morning:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thanks for the visit pryde
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Rye
...and ever so lovely write such beauty within your words.

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you again
I Can't Explain My After Reading Feelings In Words, Your Poetry And Its Lyrics Made My Day, And Every Line Touched My Heart Directly, "True Love Paralyzes The Mind" Is One Of The Best Line I Read About Love And Its A Bitter Truth. I Usually Don't Add Writings In My Library, I Am Here From Almost 3 Years And I Have Added Just 2 or 3 Writings Hardly In My Library But I Am Gonna Add This One, Thanks Sir For Such Lovely Representation of Love....

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you for reading
I mean.. how could we hate love with all these feelings and moods? this poem is amazing, Ron

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you for reading my humble work
I enjoy this one very much. It's direct and heartfelt. Is this an older or newer poem for you? It seems a little different than the others, a little more unique to you. I wonder, after reading your bio, do you ever write about boxing? Or use boxing imagery...that would be interesting. Thank you.

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you for the review,never wrote about boxing or used any images.i don`t remember when i wrote i.. read more
Oh, wow...what woman wouldn’t want a charming man to write an “ode” to her and memories of her resilient beauty? Bravo, mister. Bravo! 👏🏼

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you for the visit

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 wordman
wordman

hixson, TN



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just ask, golden glove boxer years ago,us army veteran ,a contractor is how i make my living, i am an amateur writer.. been here since june of 2013,couldn`t write then,still can`t.but who cares i .. more..

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