With Out You

These words babe !

i write for you,

you know who you are,

you hung the moon,you created the stars

 

You captivated my heart,

your the only one i see,

it`s you babe,

your the only one for me.

 

You see,

true love paralyzes the mind,

there could never be another,

my heart is blind.

 

No matter where i look,

it`s you that i see,

can`t you see inside my soul,

can`t you see inside of me.

 

My heart,is like a volcano erupting inside,

without you babe im just a drop in the sand,

i love you always,

i will always`s be your man ...

Reviews

[Jacob Clifford]

Very vulnerable expression of love. I like how this poem gives the reader a glimpse into the narrator's emotions. Truly romantic and full of heart.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Susan 🦋]

Awe, feel good words of love.. Nicely done. :-)

[wordman]

thank you for the visit.

[Susan 🦋]

You're welcome :-))

[Pratik Mishra]

Hats off to the way you express! Great poem :)

[wordman]

thank you my friend

[Chase Dylan]

Without you i am just a single speck of nothing sand.... Volcanic eruption of captivating forlorn fleeting...

[wordman]

thank you very much

[Chase Dylan]

You are very welcome, sir

[Diane]

Okay this is so sweet. Who ever this is for is going to melt! Awesome job.

[wordman]

thank you very much,just a poem

[Diane]

Welcome....

[marilyn 1225]

overwhelmed by your love a great tribute to your'' babe'' and loved one... beautiful poem

[wordman]

i am a romantic i guess marilyn,thank you for reading

[marilyn 1225]

well if you are a romantic I hope you mean what your write... do not want too many broken hearts!! joking .... you write so well!

[wordman]

i would not break a heart on purpose,and i guess all this stuff comes from somewhere in my heart

[marilyn 1225]

you have gifts and one is a huge heart!

[wordman]

thank you very much marilyn,wish i had some gifts,just silly love poems

[marilyn 1225]

that is a gift not so silly as say candy etc

[wordman]

well paul mccartney said it best, when he said just another silly love song

[marilyn 1225]

well songs pour out hearts as poetry often does u

[Bonnie Paige]

When reading poetry I love
Music like yours to think about the words that have been written. This is so beautifully gentle.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit bonnie,i love music with the poem,it enhances the words

[Coyote Poetry]

Soft, sensitive and worthwhile words shared my friend. I liked the way you used the memories and the thoughts. You made the reader understand and feel the words. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[wordman]

a tribute to the woman in your life,,thanks john

[Norah]

So romantic and beautiful! Thanks for sharing it with us.
Have you written any book?

[wordman]

thank you norah,never wrote a book

[Einstein Noodle]

damn...well said .. completely vulnerable and i hope your protagonist is on solid ground ;}
i remember swearing i would never go "there" again ... but here i am back at the door ..well said..fine music too!
E.

[wordman]

well,we`re not known for our mental stability,,thank you

[Einstein Noodle]

no...i guess we are not :((( God bless dear friend and do be well today in the moment eh?!