Bitter Sweet Memories

Bitter Sweet Memories

A Poem by wordman



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bitter sweet memories,

lay gentle on her mind,

another place,

another time.

 

The love

of my life,

that i have,

left behind.

 

she feels betrayed,

battered and beaten,

all through her mind,

she feels like a woman left behind.

 

Once her heart,

a beautiful rose,

now her heart tattered and torn,

as it starts to close.

 

Her mind wanders,

her soul at bay,

maybe love will bloom again,

i hope and pray.

 

A woman,

that has lost her bloom,

her heart melts,

as it goes back in her cocoon.

 

But one day,

her heart will start to bloom,

and i will be there,

to melt that cocoon...


© 2017 wordman

© 2018 wordman


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great poem keep up the good work . keep writing love the romantic poems .

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank`s,i guess this is my calling
jennifer little

2 Years Ago

probally ur real good at writing romantic poems
 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank`s,i appreciate it
Love this one. A true description of a heart that has lost its love. But, I do like that there is a hopeful note and possibility still exists. Great poem!

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you for reading
Some might call you a "hopeless romantic."
But, as someone once said, you seem more to be a hopeful romantic.
Impressive work, Wordman.

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

lol, i am confused in my own mind..thank you for the visit
Beautiful
Enjoyed
I loved this

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you,thought you left town
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

2 Years Ago

Nah just been busy work health issues family you know
 wordman

2 Years Ago

get well soon
I can kinda relate to this write a tad, Very nicely written from the heart.

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

i think many can relate,thank you for reading
Great words and balance of a loving heart and that of a nature write too Every day you get better as you practice your craft.

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

lol,maybe i will get it right
ooooooh i absolutely love your tone and cadence here! very reminiscent of the romantic poets of the 18th-19th cents w/ a modern-minimalist expression. bravo!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

2 Years Ago

maybe reincarnation is real,thank you for the visit
Very beautiful and touching and "she" may just melt if you keep writing like this.

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you for the visit
This poem resurrects my faith in love. Thank you for such a lovely write.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you for reading my humble work

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Added on October 9, 2017
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just ask, golden glove boxer years ago,us army veteran ,a contractor is how i make my living, i am an amateur writer.. been here since june of 2013,couldn`t write then,still can`t.but who cares i .. more..

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