Bitter Sweet Memories

Bitter Sweet Memories

A Poem by wordman



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bitter sweet memories,

lay gentle on her mind,

another place,

another time.

 

The love

of my life,

that i have,

left behind.

 

she feels betrayed,

battered and beaten,

all through her mind,

she feels like a woman left behind.

 

Once her heart,

a beautiful rose,

now her heart tattered and torn,

as it starts to close.

 

Her mind wanders,

her soul at bay,

maybe love will bloom again,

i hope and pray.

 

A woman,

that has lost her bloom,

her heart melts,

as it goes back in her cocoon.

 

But one day,

her heart will start to bloom,

and i will be there,

to melt that cocoon...


© 2017 wordman

© 2018 wordman


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A realistic journey in your words my friend. We see the damage we had done and we hope we can repair. I liked the ending. Thank you wordman for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thanks my friend,appreciate your visit
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

I enjoyed your work and you are welcome.
There's enormous sensitivity and empathy running through your poem... a rare understanding of sincere 'how it truly is' from man of woman. Fine writing, wordman. Truth is: if love is focussed around the physical, it's peripheral, no more or less.

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you em,it comes from the heart,as all real love does
I love your style pictures, music and poetry. Our words are meant to move yours certainly does.

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you for the nice comment bonnie
Your profile is full of perfect pieces that I don't know which one to pick to consider as my favourite! I really dig your style and this is amazingly written Wordman!

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

you are kind norah,i appreciate your reviews
A woman,

that has lost her bloom,

her heart melts,

as it goes back in her cocoon.



But one day,

her heart will start to bloom,

and i will be there,

to melt that cocoon...


Sound very confident and positive. the poem is another great piece. good work.

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you mirror but i am taking it down,re post it later,thinking about leaving w/c to,been here to.. read more
Mirror

2 Years Ago

okay, let me know when you have re-posted.

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