Frozen

Frozen

A Poem by wordman



 

When we first met

your heart was frozen

but we felt a spark

 

Your heart started to melt and thaw

our love started to bloom

as a beautiful spring day

as the ice melted away

 

You reached out to me

like a vine in bloom

the warmth of my heart

melted your soul

 

As I nurtured you

our passion started to grow

the love melted your heart

as we became one with nature

 

I touched you,like the sun

touches a flowering bud

I touched your soul

and our love grew like a flowering rose...



© 2018 wordman


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Aww... This is so beautiful. I love the imagery. It's after a long while, I'm getting out of dark stuff. I loved this!

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you for the visit
Absolutely love this. Sometimes I feel as though my heart is frozen... No emotion.
Then other days it's the complete opposite.. Maybe I'm crazy.
Love can either die like weeds or grow into a beautiful garden. Full of memories.

Posted 5 Months Ago


 wordman

5 Months Ago

yes it does,thank you for the visit,and no,you`re not crazy
Christa Raelyn

5 Months Ago

I hope not lol
Beautiful my friend and
Very romantic as always
I really enjoyed this
piece.

Posted 11 Months Ago


 wordman

11 Months Ago

thank you again
You make my heart sub-zero with this one. in a good way

Posted 12 Months Ago


 wordman

12 Months Ago

glad you liked it
'Frozen'
wordman,
I really life the cause and effect theme within this piece.
The title gives it's voice it's beginning..something brittle
and cold..needing warming and life.
It shows the confident awareness of honest giving
and an unselfish ability to see a change in another.
As in:
'As I nurtured you
our passion started to grow
the love melted your heart
as we became one with nature'
Blessings to you Ron.
Kathy



Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you kathy,you have a great perspective on poetry
Kathy Van Kurin

1 Year Ago

You too my friend! Keep it going Ron.Giving your voice..its good for all of us to do.
Kathy
Such a romantic tale and that picture is quite something!

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you john
beaauutiful poem..... the woman is the best enigma to solve, don't you think?

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

lol,a never ending puzzle..thank you
I'm sure this rose is free of thorns ....
Indeed your work is melting hearts of many.. Pure write, Mr. Man of words;)
Thanks for sharing! :)
Sneh

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you for the visit
Sneh

1 Year Ago

Pleasure :)
I really enjoyed this poem, that was amazing, as soon I started to read I knew it was gone be good, I like the way you worded it, just beautiful.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you for he visit
Truly this is a romantic poem. It blends dialog with beautiful images . A real blast of Spring on this cold winters night.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you very much,about 62 here and raining

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