Frozen

 

When we first met

your heart was frozen

but we felt a spark

 

Your heart started to melt and thaw

our love started to bloom

as a beautiful spring day

as the ice melted away

 

You reached out to me

like a vine in bloom

the warmth of my heart

melted your soul

 

As I nurtured you

our passion started to grow

the love melted your heart

as we became one with nature

 

I touched you,like the sun

touches a flowering bud

I touched your soul

and our love grew like a flowering rose...

Reviews

[kianatahleigh]

I really enjoyed this poem it kind of reminded me of the Spenserian sonnet, My love is like to ice, and I to fire; which is definitely a good thing.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[BlackRose]

Having to feel this kind of love is a wonderful feeling, especially after gone through a bad relationship and into something so blissful as this.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[BlackRose]

Of course, you're very welcome.

[MCS]

lovely, love and kindness is so very healing

[wordman]

thank you my x friend

[moog-drika]

Frozen heart just needs a little touch of sunlight. Rest depends on the essence of love. Such a romantic piece.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

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I like this duality in between fire and frozen. It's like man and women. wondeffuly penned and keep writing my friend.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit,the wordman is dead,can`t write a lick

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wordman is death long live to wordman. Everyone once at while . Need some time for rest don't worry ideas wqas will come and wordman will again write great poems. take care.

[wordman]

lol,,i hope so

[LKBillips]

Fire and Ice make for a steamy blossom bloom. :) I liked it. Full of romance and second chances.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Terrence Chang]

ah alas a love was created and i loved the poem. i find it like a classic poem, a good one i must say

[wordman]

thank you for the visit terrence

[Terrence Chang]

you are most welcome

[Riddhi]

This is really good and the simile that you used in this poem made it really good...It seems as if you have actually wrote it for someone very special...I am eager to read your other works also...
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing
Riddhi

[wordman]

thank you,,i usually write from music

[Riddhi]

Oh...Actually the title reminded me of the movie FROZEN..

[wordman]

yeah i know,hope it didn`t let you down

[Just Kim]

Wow! This is so very good. Very beautiful write.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Just Kim]

not a problem

[wordman]

then visit some more then,,lol

[DIVYA]

Soft yet intense. Such a beautiful expression of love.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit my friend