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Blue Autumn

Blue Autumn

A Poem by wordman
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Autumn leaves,

a whisper of snow,

the warmth from the fire

as the red embers glow .


Night fall comes

in shades of gray and black

not a star shining

as the clouds push them back


reminisce

as the day goes by

our love reminds me

of the colors of the sky


Gray and black

not a star in sight

i knew our love was over

this very night ...

© 2018 wordman


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Loved it until the last verse
But then that's life

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

but isn`t that the way life goes,,thank`s
Wild Rose

1 Year Ago

Yes
I just read you first verse again fire with red embers
Think it was Linton (Yorks .. read more
 wordman

1 Year Ago

you can get it on google images
great write. short, sweet and simple but yet conveys a very deep message.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you mr scribbler,good to see you
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MCS
well done but so very sad...

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you for the visit
Awww, that's sad; but as long as you're still alive, there's hope that love can come again.
As Gerry and the Pacemakers sang, "Don't forget that love's a game, and it can always come again, so don't let the sun catch you crying..."
Oh, and I read in your profile that you've been here five years and still can't write. Better update, honey, because I don't think that's true, at least anymore.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

you are sweet,fire one up for me
and i know the songs well,we have a am station that features.. read more
How beautiful...Short...with sweet rhymes...just the way I liked! Well done!!! :-)

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you for reading
Doesn't it almost always. :))

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

almost,yeah ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
I was lulled by the first three verses, then got to the fourth and paused, thinking, such a shame.

This is a quite beautifully built poem, that leads the reader on so very cleverly to the end and the dashing of hope.

Really liked this.

Beccy.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

lol,it must have just worked out that way
thank you for reading
Tragic and wistful...makes me feel melancholy and think of my own past. Very vivid and mesmerizing. Nice one!

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you for reading
Very beautiful, very nostalgic. Whether you loved and lost, love for the moment fills you with emotions- whether or not it is returned or genuine at all from the other is not in your control. A minor nit-pick- spelling of reminisce is grossly misspelled. Kindly correct it.

Otherwise a sublime write!

Best,
M.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you for the visit,
Ive always wondered why autumn and winter often bring loss in relationships but i guess it is just a season like everything else. Love the moody crispness!

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you for the visit

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