Blue Autumn

Blue Autumn

A Poem by wordman
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Autumn leaves,

a whisper of snow,

the warmth from the fire

as the red embers glow .


Night fall comes

in shades of gray and black

not a star shining

as the clouds push them back


reminisce

as the day goes by

our love reminds me

of the colors of the sky


Gray and black

not a star in sight

i knew our love was over

this very night ...

© 2018 wordman


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Nicely conveyed with some beautiful imagery. Thank you.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you for reading my humble work
This is beautiful. I think we all have autumn on the brain right now. I was just talking to someone about how autumn is such a romantic time and how lonely it can feel to watch cozy autumn couples if you are single. This poem captures that loneliness.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you melissa
'Love was over this very night' before I read this line I enjoyed the vivid imagery of Autumn you made ending love sound brilliantly by the description. I really liked this very much. Thank you so much for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

glad you liked it my friend
Wordman, this shock at the last was a necessary?! Of course! That made me blow and had a great short read! Thanks for sharing :) G'morning! (As per my timing)

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

smile,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
 wordman

1 Year Ago

swagatam,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

Dhonyobad! :)
beautiful poem love it
love the song too


Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

i started out with blue autumn by bobby goldsboro
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

1 Year Ago

didn't see it
ps thanks for your help I have added music to
my pipe dream poem thanks.. read more
 wordman

1 Year Ago

you`re welcome

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