candle in the wind

candle in the wind

A Poem by wordman


 



you are my first star every night

you are my day

and you are my night

you are the love of my life

 

you are like a candle in the wind

the essence of you

helps guide me in

you are my lover,my best friend

 

i couldn't live without you

in my life

you're my day 

and you're my night

 

you are

the love of my life

you made my dreams come true

when you said i love you...


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Shuuuoooo....the wind!
It's like you've said it and just said it......weight went off from the heart and replaced with true love😇
🔥Lovely read...thank you!...for sharing :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


 wordman

5 Years Ago

you`re welcome,you can paste anywhere in your poem
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5 Years Ago

Yay!! Made it in my profile...bigg thank ya😊
 wordman

5 Years Ago

you`re welcome
A sweet and beautiful sentiment; I hope you have found such love.
I will offer one other comment, knowing that we are all here to improve our writing. The word your is used to denote possession, as in your hat; in the case of assigning an object or attribute to another person you want to use YOU'RE.
meaning 'you are'. The apostrophe, you see, replaces the A in the word ARE,which of course is understood. Just me being picky, but learning English rules like this will improve your writing. You're very sensitive, I can tell, and I really was impressed by your candle picture.

Posted 5 Years Ago


 wordman

5 Years Ago

thank you very much,i have fixed that 3 times today,it keeps going back
 wordman

5 Years Ago

and i did it again
Beautiful words and a amazing video. Love is our best days. I liked the complete poem my friend. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


 wordman

5 Years Ago

thank you john
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
“Some writers are confused by you're and your. A mistake involving these constitutes a grammatical howler. You're is a contraction of you are. It has no other uses. This is a 100% rule. If you cannot expand it to you are in your sentence, then it is wrong. Your is a possessive adjective. (Other possessive adjectives are my, your, his, her, its, our, and their.)”

www.grammar-monster.com


Posted 5 Years Ago


 wordman

5 Years Ago

thank you monster
Well well well! Look who has found his own, "true love". This is amazing. You just need to make sure you change "your" to "you're". This is too sweet and genuine to have a grammatical error weighing it down.

Posted 5 Years Ago


 wordman

5 Years Ago

thank you,and i will
Beautiful expression ;-] Enjoyed the read.

Posted 5 Years Ago


 wordman

5 Years Ago

thank you for the visit

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