On Your Heart

 

  On your heart,

i will leave my print,

not a lot,

but just a hint .

 

You will think of me,

when the time is right,

lying in your bed,

on a summers night.

 

Or maybe i`ll come,

from a flickering light,

from a candle burning

inside your mind.  

 

Where i`ll be,

till the end of time,

tucked away in your heart

where we will never part...

Reviews

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

And forever is the best place to be maybe just close enough not to be too far...🌹

[wordman]

thank you,good to see ya

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Pleasure always and I’m always here lurking behind the scenes- hope u r well🌹

[Sami Khalil]

"from a flickering light,

from a candle burning

inside your mind.



Where i`ll be"

[wordman]

thank you sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome wordman.

[Karmee]

this is such a wonderful beautiful write, you write very well, so poetic

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[NotUsinganymore]

Very nice love poem c: I saw this as more of a platonic love poem than a romantic one actually.

[wordman]

thank you junglee

[Chase Dylan]

Printed love on heart stamped with ash forevermore... One image. One test. One word. Let it burn to test the wick at both ends...

[wordman]

nice thoughts,thank you

[Jade]

Such a wonderful, beautiful write.

[wordman]

thank you jade

[Miss Sharon]

So beautifully romantic...as you write them so well! ~Sharon

[wordman]

thank you sharon

[Alexandra G.]

AMAZING WORK! I felt every single word, thank you for this piece...

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[goldenscar__]

Finally a new poem.. You have this warm, 40s vibes touch in your poetry
I love it, & thank you or sharing.

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[wordman]

well now i believe you missed moon beams,and here i thought you just didn`t like my poetry anymore

[goldenscar__]

noo no, I haven't been active in Writerscafe for a while. I'm sorry..

[wordman]

i forgive you then.

[DIVYA]

This lovely rhyming poem charms my soul. Beautiful expressions Ron 💕

[wordman]

thank you very much divya