Sunday Morning

Sunday Morning

A Poem by wordman



There`s something ,

about a Sunday morning,

that makes you feel all alone .

 

when i woke

this morning,

the sky was gray

 

a wisp of cold winds

blowing all day

a hint of winter in the air

 

the rain

will come soon

as the sun goes down revealing the moon

 

a feel of 

lonilness in the air

as i sit on the porch swing

 

wishing

that i wasn`t

all alone...

 

© 2020 wordman


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Shows true emotions.
You expressed the feeling of loneliness.
Good write.

Posted 4 Days Ago


 wordman

3 Days Ago

thank you melinda
All have different perspectives for all seasons, when winters stand merry and springs get ruthless, who knows.
I wish you have great times in the rest of this winter!
Typo if you don't mind, loneliness* :) Be blessed.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

just a poem,,thank you
I am not a fan of winter, so if I had to compared Loneliness to winter, I must say you have expressed it perfectly.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

thank you for the visit
Very sad poem. We all are lonely.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

sometimes we all are,,thank you
You pull at the heartstrings with your feelings of loneliness.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

you are right
Lea Sheryn

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you!
 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

thank you to ..................
i think you poem touches just the right amount of loneliness, Wordman ... enough to inspire a person to perhaps do something about it .. call a friend .. walk in the wilds .. your title and repeating it as a Sunday deepens the pain in my mind ... raised a Catholic Sunday was always family day .. starting with going to Church .. and my most fond memories spring up .. i guess i am a fortunate man in that respect .. your poem moves me to want to sit with your narrator and listen more .... wishing you well today sir! thank you for sharing your poetry ..
E.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


 wordman

3 Weeks Ago

and i thank you for reading e,sunday is always lonely for someone
I love this write Ron! It's good to read your beautiful poetry again my friend. ~Sharon

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


 wordman

3 Weeks Ago

thank you sharon,i kinda miss yours
the rain

will come soon

as the sun goes down revealing the moon

a beautiful piece of melancholy, Ron. Gorgeous:)

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


 wordman

3 Weeks Ago

thank you miss pryde
you captured the essence of this song beautifully Wordman, or it complimented yours which ever way it went first. I rarely feel this way on a Sunday, usually it's Monday that makes me blue.

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

me either,thanks for the visit
There is something about an empty and quiet kind of Sunday. You painted the picture of the grey, gloomy morning so vividly for me. There are times when solitude really gets to us. I enjoyed this poem so much.

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for dropping by
DIVYA

1 Month Ago

A pleasure all mine 🤗

First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

255 Views
17 Reviews
Rating
Added on January 11, 2020
Last Updated on January 11, 2020

Author

 wordman
wordman

hixson, TN



About
just ask, golden glove boxer years ago,us army veteran ,a contractor is how i make my living, i am an amateur writer.. been here since june of 2013,couldn`t write then,still can`t.but who cares i .. more..

Writing
Hurt Hurt

A Poem by wordman



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..