Without You

 

 

These words babe !

i write for you,

you know who you are,

you hung the moon,you created the stars

 

You captivated my heart,

your the only one i see,

it`s you babe,

your the only one for me.

 

You see,

true love paralyzes the mind,

there could never be another,

my heart is blind.

 

No matter where i look,

it`s you that i see,

can`t you see inside my soul,

can`t you see inside of me.

 

My heart,is like a volcano erupting inside,

without you babe i`m just a drop in the sand,

i love you always,

i will always`s be your man...

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I imagined your words being sung. They would make fine romantic lyrics. The title reminded me of Nilsson. I had Can't live, in my head as I read your lines. Nicely conveyed. Love your posted image as well.

Chris

[wordman]

thank you chris

[Weeping willow]

Love your poem and these were nicely expressed ;-]

[wordman]

thank you w/w i appreciate the visit

[Poetic Beauty]

Love can entrance is and if it’s soul felt love it will envelope us and pulse with its own rhythm forever and eternally

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

A very nice poem on love and its devotion. Thank you for sharing.

[wordman]

thank you for reading