LITTLE JOURNEY

The poem makes me remember my past experiences relating to my present I find them to be amazing so I share this...

JOURNEY

Sun shined bright as I remembered my life

Smile and laughter was what I am able to comprise

All I hear was there was no fear

Everyone cherished and all very dear

 

Road trips with friends

Partying at the dead ends

Lost in the world of my own

I was always happy and never alone

 

Sharing of food at the last bench

Bunking classes and getting completely drenched

Summers were fun and monsoons too

All I recall is a winter break through

 

Fights and grudges held between groups

Yet a love beheld and formed as troops

All went back past the time

Now is just the memories are mine

 

All I get is a world of evil

People are more like converting to devil

No love is found and even hard to get bound

And I am trapped in a small compound

 

My rides and speed lost in time

All I have got is a walk of mine

Struggling in my cheerful age and time

Trying to be one among the men that rhyme

 

Still I keep a hope in despair

I want my life to repair

Wanting my past to show again

Still the future might hold something I gain

 

Tired of being sad now all through

All I want is some peace and is with YOU...

Author's Note

The poem is a work of my personal emotions and is just the outcome of a bit temporary situations which might fade away soon....or I hope so it does..

I would love to have reviews from all of you wonderful people out there..
Thank you..

Reviews

[Linear]

Stand up my friend, be who you are, be moulded by all that's good refute the bad, your emotions flowed from a heart in despair, stand up my friend, be who you are.

[Black]

a nice written poem ,
though really sad,
though i hate the different colours
but meh
that is just my opinion!

[Thea]

Aw...Sadly written but has a good message! I love how you emphasize "All went back past the time .Now is just the memories are mine"
Well done... :)))

[stars are far]

This is so emotional and great poem ,i really enjoyed reading that ..

"My rides and speed lost in time
All I have got is a walk of mine"

these two lines are amazing :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A beautiful write, the emotions speak out very poetically, great ;)