My Last Song/Goodbye

My Last Song/Goodbye

A Poem by Rayne Stanton
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One of my songs.

"

I never wanna lose you for the things I've done wrong,

please listen to me, I swear, this will be my last song.

 

I never meant to hurt you,

never meant to say those words.

Now I know I screwed up,

I never wanna see you hurt.

time and time again i count,

the days that pass us by.

The days you arent in my arms

I guess this means

goodbye.

 

I always put you in second, but now I can't get those seconds back.

I always thought i was strong, but your the one who made me crack.

The trail you led me on, has twisted outta shape.

But now your arms will always be,

my escape.

 

I never meant to hurt you,

never meant to say those words.

Now I know that I screwed up,

I never wanna see you hurt.

Time and time again I count,

The days that pass us by.

The days you aren't in my arms,

I guess this means

goodbye.

 

I never wanna lose you, for the things that I've done wrong,

Please listen to me, I love you, and I never wanna let you go.

© 2011 Rayne Stanton


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Wow this is a great song very well written

Posted 12 Years Ago


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TJ
"I always put you in second, but now I can't get those seconds back." love this line. I can definitely tell this is a song, very melodic!!
Good work

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You spelled escape wrong at the end of the third stanza.


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful. Very well written and very nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Rayne Stanton
Rayne Stanton

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My real name is Maddie Linde, however Rayne is my middle name and also the name of my favorite character in one of my unfinished novels. I'm 17 years old and have been writing short stories and poems .. more..

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