NeverEverLast

NeverEverLast

A Poem by fallendemonofmercy
"

really about a kind of flimsy love that wasn't meant to stay near

"

 

 
Here you are
You’ve come at last
To erase my scar
To undo the past
 
Is that possible?
The damage is done
Such merry, happy thoughts might be plausible
You had me won
 
But now is not the time
To convince me I need you
So sing me your rhyme
Begin anew  
 
Rise from the ashes
As your wind meets my fire  
And out forces bring endless clashes
And the flames grow higher        
 
A match made in heaven
Or so it would seem     
Anything but benevolent
What could it mean?
 
I’m done
I’m through
It’s back to square one
When I’m not over you
 
Years soon pass
Then you come by
Nothings changed – we could never last
You say you want to be mine
 
So here you are
You’ve come at last
You see my scar
Reminds you of our past
 
But don’t be surprised
When I tell you this
I’ll end our demise
With one last kiss
 
And I whisper in your ear
“I’m over you
My dear…”  
 

 

© 2009 fallendemonofmercy


Author's Note

fallendemonofmercy
3/10/09
3/11/09


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I really enjoyed this. Top notch poetry. A crisp fast pace got me hooked right from the start. Very creative and beautifully written. Well done. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


this was incredable...nice work

Posted 15 Years Ago


Ah, this is very relatable in a way. You write in a way that forces the reader to really pay attention and take in what their reading. This is good! Great work!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


'Rise from the ashes
As your wind meets my fire
And out forces bring endless clashes
And the flames grow higher'

That, is beautiful. I loved that line SO much. it fit so well, flowed easily, with a great ring to it. Nice rhyme. Oh how I loved this. So raw with emotion and straight from the heart.
Amazing.

- Kriss

Posted 15 Years Ago


Interesting. very interesting i do like the ending and you wrote it where its easy to follow so nice flow on your writing. very nice!


Posted 15 Years Ago



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