Every Drop

Every Drop

A Poem by Aly

When I said the last words to you.
I gave the biggest drop I could to you.
All the healing you gave to me.
I gave to you.

Every word I write 
Every letter I send 
Is my drop to you.

I bet you didn't know you were healing me.
I didn't know every smile we shared was a drop to my heart.
I knew you were healing my heart.
But I didn't realize every smile we shared.
Every touch we had.
Was helping me heal my wounds.
You were sewing my wounds. 
Stitch by stitch.

The pieces of my heart that shattered. 
The heart that once beat on it's own. 
Was beating again because of you. 

I was alive again because of you.

Every heart beat was because of you.
When we hugged I felt complete.
Every act of kindness was a reminder of who I wanted to be.

Thank you for fixing me.

© 2013 Aly


Author's Note

Aly
Inspired by the song Medicine by Daughter. And I was inspired by my own personal experience by my very special person.

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Beautiful. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thanks so much :)
You were his broken vase, he was your glue. No, wait. That makes you sound like a craft project. Let me try again. You were a ripped blanket, and he was your needle and thread? Hmmm..... don't like the sound of that one....too long. (sigh) I just know I'll wake up in the middle of the night and think of the perfect metaphor, then forget it in the morning. ;)
-Mer

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

lol.
Thank you :)
:)
disheveledApathy

11 Years Ago

Welcome ;)
We all need that someone we can turn to when we are broken I'm glad you've found that person!! Great work, nicely wriiten

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

Don't be too much. Haha. We're not together. It's a little complicated. And a long story.
C.C. Marx

11 Years Ago

Complicated is like the motto of my life, if you ever need to vent or get out that long story I'm he.. read more
Aly

11 Years Ago

:) will do!
This is beautiful. It's extremely well written, and has a flow to it that I cannot describe. Charming :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thanks so much :)
wonderfful! this person is very lucky to have such an amazing poet as you in their life. i cant wait for more beautiful poetry such as this :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

:) thank you
Beautiful and heartfelt!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thank you :) :) I love it when you read and review my writing!! :D
Michael Stevens

11 Years Ago

You're entirely welcome; it makes it easy because you're quite talented!
Aly

11 Years Ago

thank you :) I really appericate that.
It's a great feeling when someone comes along to help us through. Very beautifully expressed here.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thank you :)
there you go, healing is all in the mind anyway! excellent piece of prose.....

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

Thank you. Glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
minor error: I believe "hear" from the fourth line to the last is meant as heart. small detail that could be fixed.

Anyways, a good write. Thank you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

yes sorry its Heart :)
I like the idea behind this poem it reflects rejuvenation and hope and support. I liked it, good write Aly! you're on a roll

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aly

11 Years Ago

thank you :)

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