Just Know

He walks right past me.

I wonder if things will ever be serious between me and him.

I don't want to let you go.

So just know I'm still waiting for you.

Just know I still feel happy as when our love first began.

Baby, I wouldn't mind taking this slow.

Just as long as I have you.

Did I really misunderstand you?

Maybe. Maybe not.

Because I remember the way he looks at me.

The day he made a funny face just for me,

Every about you.

Makes my love for you grow.

All your flaws I never see because I'm in love.

Just know you'll never be second best.

Just know you're perfect to me.

Author's Note

It's about J. And well... things are really slow with us and nothing is moving forward but this is my way of saying "I'm still waiting because I still feel loyal to you." but I admit guys I'm close to moving on. Also inspired by the song "Feelings Show by Colbie Caillant"

Reviews

[Kenzi Griffin]

Again, and I know I am basically repeating myself, but I relate to this so well. Except in my case, "J" has no interest in me anymore but yet I still feel I must be loyal to him and that I can't give up on him yet.... Great write! You're an amazing writer!!

[Aly]

thank you! I feel the same way about everytthing you just said

[Kenzi Griffin]

Yeah, it's sort of a suckish feeling because I've already let him know that I will not stop loving him until he has told me so, and he hasn't. And even if he did tell me, I would still secretly love him.

[Sir Joseph]

Very beautiful poem! Hope everything works out!

[Aly]

thank you

[KeeD]

Really cool, hope it works out no matter what direction you chose to go. You'll be alright Aly, I just know you will :)

[Aly]

Thanks :) really means alot.

[Michael Stevens]

Just know that I wish you luck, and I thought this poem was top-o-the-pops!

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

This is really sweet.
good job 100/100.

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

once again, a really nice poem. Though if things aren't moving forward, moving on is a good option. Love is something that can come and go, and if hes not open to you, then close the door and start the search anew.

Anyways, I'm glad he's inspiring such beautiful poetry though. Keep up the good work :D

[Aly]

Yeah I've decided to pretty much move on.
I know right? only good thing coming out of all this is Poetry haha.

[quinfinn]

i admire your tenacity and loyalty but some times you need to let go if you are hanging on to an unraveling string, because it may well snap and send you plummeting downward toward a hard fall. excellent write here , Aly...i was able to feel your emotions, well.

[Aly]

thank you so much! much appericated it Quin. And you're right it's probably time I move on.

[quinfinn]

i don't wish to embarrass you, but you are young, lovely and have a lifetime ahead of you. somone out there is going to scoop you up and treat you with the love and respect you deserve...be choosy, you are worth it.

[Aly]

No you're right, and I did meet someone exactly like that but he's away right now. But he'll be home next year.

[quinfinn]

if he's worth the wait that's a good thing! good luck, honey!

[Aly]

He defintiely is, but he also said I could I see other people . . seeing other people isn't that great when all you get is heart-break. But hey I always have something to write about. But I'm pretty sure he's the one I'm suppose to be with.

[quinfinn]

just remember that that implies the door swings both ways and you won't be his "one and only".....i never like that"arrangement" because it always ends up in difficulty, but you know what is best for you (i hope)

[Aly]

It's complicated and a long story. I know you think he doesn't like me the way I like him, but he does. I know him. ( I don't mean this in a mean tone) But do you know guys who say nothing when a girl tells them she likes him. Do you guys who only say "Thank you for being honest with me" I've known him for a long time. He's a sweet guy. No one ever says a bad thing about him. He said that because as young as I am and as old as he is. He doesn't want me to commit to him just yet. As I'm barely sixteen and he wants me to know what's like to see other people. I know that when I got a Christmas card from him he meant every word he wrote and I know that he appericates my letters and the gifts I send him.

[quinfinn]

well, that makes good sense to me. 16 is very young to be in love. and i am not raggin on your age, but it is true. you are smarter than most your age. i hope all works out just the way you want it to!

[Aly]

Exactly. It's just never been the right time for us. I've known him since I was fourteen (almost 15) and he was 17. We were friends first and then feelings developed. It is young I admit it's even crazy to me I feel this way but it's totally worth it. Thank you! I hope so too. Got 14 or 15 months left til I see him again.

[quinfinn]

well, i wish you all the best and true happiness!

[Aly]

thank you :)

[quinfinn]

you're welcome!