Try

Note for the readers: this is another poem about J so if you're getting sick of them. Don't even bother reading it.

Hear my plea

That sport you love so much would you walk away and quit?

That's how I feel when it's about me

You just walked away

I thought about walking away but stay commited

I loved you

I loved you

I was willing to rekindle the flame 

To try again

To try and succeed 

This isn't "just because" or "There's no one better"

I loved you

All I wanted was to try again

Nothing matters now

You walked away

Before I could

I debated whether to stay or leave.

If you saw it through my eyes

Would you give me a second chance?

Would you try again?

Reviews

[Kenzi Griffin]

I know how the feeling of this poem.. I was confronted with the same challenge and even now, though I have accepted another in my life, I still love the one who stole my heart completely. But he does not find interest in me anymore and I have to let go. Well, not really but I am allowing myself to fall for another, ya know? I love the first more than ever and will continue to love, as he well knows but I also have made room for another. But anyways, great write! You really know how to explain your feelings through your writing! Good job!

[Leigh]

Sorry to hear you are still hung up on J it must be the real thing and dont apologise for writing what you feel most strongly about, thats when true expression comes out I guess. This is very real and heartfelt. Wherever this cad is go and find him and have it out with him, even if its just in another poem. I'll read

[Aly]

oh don't worry.
I'm getting over him :)
Like when you read "I Won't Deny"
When I was writing it was about J, but. . . I've met someone else and it's a been month now and I've pretty much fallen for him, and well. "I Won't Deny" is about this other guy now :)

[Leigh]

Cool

[marie]

great piece:) sorry things have turned out like this...

[Aly]

thank you :)

[marie]

no problem:)

[Sir Joseph]

Bravo on the great poem!

[Aly]

thank you.

[TawnyBlueStar]

Oh how sad. But a wonderful poem nonetheless. I like it

[Astrid Wanye]

Nicely done! But I'm sorry though, he must have really hurt you :( but isn't it weird how when were hurt it makes the BEST poems??? Nice job!

[Aly]

Thank you! And that is so true!

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

Oh Miss Aly, what are we going to do about this? You gotta either get that boy or move on along. I am so glad he can inspire you, but you should find a positive muse :D

This was a very emotionally stirring poem, and well worded. I really enjoyed it a lot :D

[Aly]

thank you. Well we're over but he inspires me.

[C.C. Marx]

Aly, aly, aly!! It's been too long and I sincerely hoped by now you would've told him how you feel, it's time, no time like the present....maybe he would be willingly to give it a try ;) nicely done

[Aly]

My friend...it indeed has been too long and I guess you don't know...J and I are over.

[C.C. Marx]

Nope I was unaware you were even a thing!!! Ahh you need to keep me in the loop

[Aly]

We were never together we just...it just ended.

[C.C. Marx]

I see what u mean, whatever spark is gone

[Aly]

mm-hmm.

[C.C. Marx]

Maybe it's for the best chica, I mean I could insert a ton of cliches right here

[Aly]

Lol. "Plenty of fish in the sea"

[C.C. Marx]

"If you love something let it go, if it was yours it will come back, if it doesn't it was never yours in the first place" haha

[Aly]

"You have to kiss a bunch of frogs to find your prince"

[C.C. Marx]

"Absence makes the heart grow fonder".......or not ;)

[Aly]

"What doesn't kill you makes you stronger" ( I hate this cliche by the way but it's one I could think of at the moment) haha.

[C.C. Marx]

"All is fair in love and war." I'm running out I may have to start googling

[Aly]

"Love makes you do crazy things" yeah that's how I feel as well!

[C.C. Marx]

Oooh I gotta good one "its better to have loved than never loved at all

[quinfinn]

oh Aly....you are very young and so i say this as a father figure......whatever man finally returns that love you have inside your heart...will certainly be a very happy and fortunate man indeed. i wish you all happiness...chin up...it's coming!

[Aly]

Quin, I know I am very very young haha. But J is inspiring me at the moment.

[quinfinn]

i know...i get it