Over and Over Again

Over and Over Again

A Story by Aly

A long time ago there was a King and a Queen. They had a daughter.

A princess?

You could say that.

 

There was a curse.

The Princess is forced to have eternal youth. To never die.

 

The Princess has seen many things

She has seen Betrayal. Love. Death. Friendship.

 

She’s forced to relive life. Over and over again.

Never dying.  Only having rebirth.

 

“How do you know she . . .”

“She chooses her age”

“Sometimes she’s a little child. Sometimes she’s an adult.”

“But she never dies. Never gets to die with the men she loved.  She has to go on living life without them. Without everyone she ever loved that’s buried in the ground.”

 

© 2013 Aly


Author's Note

Aly
Just so everyone knows I just thought of it and this is a conversation between a boy and girl. And when the girl is talking about the story of the princess she's talking about herself. Just a fun little idea.

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Woah, that would be a horrible curse! To never get to die with the one you love, or having to see all the terrible things in the world. Yikes!!

On the other hand, great story/poem! I like it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


there is a bit of a tense issue at the beginning where you randomly switch from using the past tense to the present, but its really well done overall. i like the concept, i like the dialogue-type bits at the end. Overall, a very well done piece :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aly

9 Years Ago

thank you!
Great work...shows your writing skills


Posted 9 Years Ago


Aly

9 Years Ago

thank you
Interesting. :) It really puts the idea of immortality in perspective... Great work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aly

9 Years Ago

thanks :)
Oooh, this would make a great story, you should follow up on this some more.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aly

9 Years Ago

thanks :)
A fine story!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aly

9 Years Ago

thanks

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