What Can I Say?

What Can I Say?

A Poem by Aly

Where did you go?
You were here
But now you're gone

Just trying to breathe
Trying to smile
All the while my heart shatters
And my world falls down

Chorus:
What can I say
To make you stay 
How can I show my feelings
Because I feel you walking away
But what can I say
What can I say 
To make you stay

Did I mess up?
Not say enough?
Why do you second guess
All I feel for you

Chorus again

With every last breath
Every piece of my strength
I'll stay til the end 
Just to prove myself to you

If I have to let go
I'll let you go
But you'll know I never give up
On You 
Or Me too....

© 2014 Aly


Author's Note

Aly
There's nothing on here that says "song writing" but this is a song I wrote. I wrote this today.

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very interesting and well written song. nice :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


very nice thanks for sharing

Posted 7 Years Ago


I know this!! The feeling Hehe. :) The feeling of what can I say To make you stay by me.... Alas words never help in that affair. It's what you do in the end that will make them go or stay... Such heartfelt song Aly. I felt your cries in this for they are with me aswell. I wish you happiness and strength. All and all I liked your song It wouldn't hurt to pay more detail though for us readers want more Hehe :) But this came deep and changing or editing would do more harm than good for you. Cause you opened up in this which I admire this piece. A very well Done Aly! :) Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is an excellent song, and I really mean that!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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