What Can I Say?

Where did you go?

You were here

But now you're gone

Just trying to breathe

Trying to smile

All the while my heart shatters

And my world falls down

Chorus:

What can I say

To make you stay 

How can I show my feelings

Because I feel you walking away

But what can I say

What can I say 

To make you stay

Did I mess up?

Not say enough?

Why do you second guess

All I feel for you

Chorus again

With every last breath

Every piece of my strength

I'll stay til the end 

Just to prove myself to you

If I have to let go

I'll let you go

But you'll know I never give up

On You 

Or Me too....

Author's Note

There's nothing on here that says "song writing" but this is a song I wrote. I wrote this today.

Reviews

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

very interesting and well written song. nice :)

[Jeannear]

very nice thanks for sharing

[Carl Drake Barnard]

I know this!! The feeling Hehe. :) The feeling of what can I say To make you stay by me.... Alas words never help in that affair. It's what you do in the end that will make them go or stay... Such heartfelt song Aly. I felt your cries in this for they are with me aswell. I wish you happiness and strength. All and all I liked your song It wouldn't hurt to pay more detail though for us readers want more Hehe :) But this came deep and changing or editing would do more harm than good for you. Cause you opened up in this which I admire this piece. A very well Done Aly! :) Thanks for sharing :)

[Michael Stevens]

This is an excellent song, and I really mean that!