Smile

Smile

A Poem by the writer of woe
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Just some thoughts of my beloved.

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Is it not wrong to see
That which cannot be?
A smile upon the face
Is nothing but of love a trace
Lying empty as cold stone
And not a king set upon his throne.
But it was a bird to soar high
Like a truth in place of life
There is nothing that is more worthwhile
Than upon her face, lying a smile.

© 2015 the writer of woe


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I liked the flow of words and the good wisdom in the words.
"There is nothing that is more worthwhile
Than upon her face, lying a smile."
A smile make folks thinks you are up to something and having some fun. A good place to be. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the writer of woe

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.



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Smiles are day makers they will lift spirits to unseen heights (though personally I would of used seeing instead of lying)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Once again, I find myself thinking that you could have more freedom without the rhyme scheme. I want to know what exactly is inside your head. Then again, I do enjoy the stylistic approach and that sort of sentiment does bide itself welcome in this sort of work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the writer of woe

9 Years Ago

My thing with the rhyme scheme is basically to make the work more beautiful and flowing rather than .. read more
I liked the flow of words and the good wisdom in the words.
"There is nothing that is more worthwhile
Than upon her face, lying a smile."
A smile make folks thinks you are up to something and having some fun. A good place to be. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the writer of woe

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Added on March 12, 2015
Last Updated on March 12, 2015
Tags: love, smile, happiness, face, emotion

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Rockford , IL



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