She

She

A Poem by the writer of woe
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Part of my literary poems.

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What is she?
But an angel with no wings
Like a fire without red
The burning surely burns red

What is she?
Who is she?

She is the world above
Like a heaven blessed with love
Like a cool inferno that warms
As she makes the broken heart form

Where is she?
Why her?

Why the intoxication?
Why doesn't she shun?
What makes a heart beat's beat?
Is it her for she is more than meat?

Yes it is her!
Yes,
        It!
            Is!
                 My!
                        Love!

© 2015 the writer of woe


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Many postings here confuse font with poetry to the extent I have become eye shy of poems that use clever typesetting in lieu of clear language. Your "falling" in love spacing is an exception that does not set my teeth on edge.

In your poem there are many questions. Personally I like questions, especially questions that require a difficult and personal answer. The answers you supply in the third stanza, are they difficult? are they personal? Are they answers at all? What did a poet feel when a poet penned these answers. I hope a poet was better satisfied than a reader.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the writer of woe

6 Years Ago

I was actually pretty satisfied as I wrote this. It took a lot of happy emotion from me and put it i.. read more



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Beautiful and oh so romantic :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the writer of woe

6 Years Ago

Thanks! I was trying for romantic!
This is poetry! Great flow, wording, format and crystal clear message, bravo!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the writer of woe

6 Years Ago

Thank you! I try to get my massage out there, but encrypted at the same time. Poems like this are ju.. read more
Beautiful poem full of love :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the writer of woe

6 Years Ago

Thank you, it means a lot when people call it beautiful!
nazia

6 Years Ago

You're welcome I really liked it.
Oh! Dear Writer of Woe, you carried me to your place to see this your your angel without wing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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the writer of woe

6 Years Ago

It's nice to know that I helped you feel emotions, thanks!
Like a fire with no red... Great line.
Good use of words. :) enjoyed this one!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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the writer of woe

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Firehawk!
Ana D S M

6 Years Ago

Ha! :) you're welcome!

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Tags: heart, red, fire, wings, angels, love, Woman

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