Me+Her=Forever

As i met her first at school
I thought if i acted cool
She would think me cute and funny
But just as cute as a baby bunny

She fills my heart with joy and happiness
But not like heartbreaks sappiness
People say its wrong and not right
But i know our love squeezes tight

All I love to say to her
Is you+me=forever
She smiled she blushed
But her heart i know i touched

Reviews

[Pencrafter]

Your poem is simple to understand and easy to read, yet speaks of powerful emotions. I would suggest getting rid of a couple of 'but' words in the first and last verses. I'm not sure I would want to be regarded as a cute bunny, but hey, that's the writers choice. Interesting poem. Keep writing.

[kendrich russel young]

To Pencrafter: I haven't written in a while and i was told about this site and gave it a try i will do better in future writes

[♥ Lexii Boo &hea..]

AWWWW i love this its so cute your gf is a very lucky girl :D

[Btwixer]

Very nicely written and emotional.