Moon

Scrawling

I'm like the moon
No light of my own
I try to pretend
but my dark side gives me away
I'll reflect your warmth
though I'm cold inside
Just another impostor

Reviews

[Tyler and Lozza]

This is really good !!!!! :D - Lozza and Tyler

A very neat poem! It was neat how you put feelings behind the moon. As well as a bit of bantering between the sun and moon. Creative idea!
This poem was short but very sweet. It really had my attention.
It could also mean a lot more than simply the moon and sun. A lot of people are shadowed by somebodies glory, had me thinking of that!
A cool poem!