A Letter Filled With Goodbyes

A Letter Filled With Goodbyes

A Poem by Bella❤❤❤

You receive a handwritten letter,
From your best friend named Kim
Open it with sweaty palms of worry,
Cause you know what has been,
Your eyes have gone blurry,
You skim through the letter
Skim towards the end
Hold your head with no expression,
Knowing you have lost connection,
Water filled eyes,
A heart filled with cries,
And a letter filled with Goodbyes...

© 2014 Bella❤❤❤

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Enjoyed this Bella,took me back to the early 90's when I used to send love letters to my wife to be, 400 miles away

Posted 7 Years Ago

Not having had the pleasure of reading any of your writings Bella I went ahead and read many. You seem to have an uncanny attention span that allows you to tap into the nature of the moment. Whichever may be that you are facing. I say that because you try to bring alive human connections. That is no easy task. Relationships have become a thing of convinience and very much a thing of give and take. Emotions have been replcaed for what is it that I can obtain from this or other person. Male & Female alike in this country at least them boundaries have been quickly demolished. So when you so honestly share about the "living dynamic" in between two people and how this actually may affect you it comes as innocent and to some extent suprising. Of course the tone is sad but then again it has to be as the departure is imminent. I interpreted in the worse possible way so I hope I was mistaken.

Friendships are indeed a foundation

I hope that side of possitivity can get across loud and clear.

Thank You.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Expressed the moment of reading a letter passionately.

Posted 9 Years Ago

I liked this a letter of emotion, a cry in the wind. Been their wrote a few my self over the years:))))) Awesome read:)))))))))))))

Posted 9 Years Ago


9 Years Ago

Thank you(: !

9 Years Ago

Your welcome:)

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Added on March 9, 2014
Last Updated on March 9, 2014




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