Blink of an Eye (Senryu)

Age

        time moving faster

yesterday I was a boy

       today almost dust

Reviews

[Destiny Dreamer]

OH Awesome, very very TRUE and DEEP! Time is really moving very fast. :/

[Willard Wells]

And as the years move on the time moves faster. Thank you for reading and commenting on my work. I am glad you enjoyed it.

[Destiny Dreamer]

U are WELCOME!! Ur work has true meaning, truly enjoyed it!

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Tomorrow you get to be something else :)

[Willard Wells]

You are correct since I am only seeing the physical body and not the spirit that will go on. But the spirit is strong and will find new paths to follow now and later. Thank you for reading and commenting on my work.

[Confuser]

Robert: Perfect 17; have never attempted Senryu, great title and wording. And it's so profound, time does move so quickly. Just brilliant writing...and oh the memories of childhood, can you remember? I love it. Thank you so very much...Dale

[Willard Wells]

Thank you so much Dale for your kind words. I have found this form to be very addictive so it is perfect for me.

[Confuser]

Robert: You're welcome, probably would become obsessed. Great work....

[Relic]

So true. Many who are young won't grasp the weight of this but those who are older will recognize the force behind these words.

[Willard Wells]

Many words and ideas that I ignored in my youth have now come to roost. Thank you for taking time to read my work.

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome words... crazy how fast life moves. As I watch my daughters grow it puts into perspective how fast it is all going. Nice write

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Aaron. I always value your words..