Ode To Coffee

Ode To Coffee

A Poem by Stacy (Anastasia) Purvis
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Just a morsel in reference to my Love affair with Coffee <3

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Ode To Coffee, That Frivolous, Daunting Liquid
50 Shades To Cure Your Pain
An Open IV Right Into My Vein.

Ode To Coffee In All It's Dark Splendor
Flirting With Danger And Full Of Lust
Beckoning With Flavor, Each One Robust

Ode To Coffee Without Which I'd Be Dead
My Cup Is Ready And Awaiting Your Hue
Au Revoir Until Then, I Bid Thee, Adieu. 

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© 2017 Stacy (Anastasia) Purvis


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"Ode To Coffee, That Frivolous, Daunting Liquid
50 Shades To Cure Your Pain
An Open IV Right Into My Vein." - A good choice of Ode poem material. Some grammar things I noticed - you don't need to capitalize "that", "Daunting" and so on. Unless you've done it for aesthetic purposes. I notice that you've done it throughout the whole piece, so if It has a purpose - keep it. I applaud you're consistency.

"Ode To Coffee In All It's Dark Splendor
Flirting With Danger And Full Of Lust
Beckoning With Flavor, Each One Robust" - I don't usually care for a ton of rhyming in poetry, but I feel like the rhyming is not detrimental to the poems intent here. It's not distracting and I believe the words fit nicely.

"Ode To Coffee Without Which I'd Be Dead
My Cup Is Ready And Awaiting Your Hue
Au Revoir Until Then, I Bid Thee, Adieu. " - I like the playful tone of the piece. It's easygoing and fun to read.

Overall, I like that the piece only lasts about a sip of said coffee. Interesting description and word choice. Great ending. Thank you for the read, write on.

-Rynn

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I'm in definite agreement! Without coffee I'm dragging my feet around. Delightful verse :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


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An ode I can support. Fantastic.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Thank you all so much for your wonderful compliments. I haven't been on here (much) lately due to a bout with influenza.
But never fear, I will be back shortly. : )

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

2 Years Ago

Sorry to hear about that... Fight the icky feeling's and feel better soon!
Stacy (Anastasia) Purvis

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much. You are too kind. 😊
Silente-Write

2 Years Ago

Of course, maybe drink some coffee... Scare the sick away, haha
I have quite the love affair with coffee... I am reserved with it, take special care with it, but when I am dead, will it still be there...? Hah, loved this, an ode' to the greatness, indeed... With caffeine this was penned...

Posted 2 Years Ago


makes me wanna drink coffee now! it was poetically great... words make it look like some Latin song....or tribute... great read

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laughed all the way through your tribute, salivating I was because am not ashamed to say that i'm
addicted to 'Coffee in all its Dark Splendour'!!!

Apart from the superb subject matter, you've laid a great display, used great phrases and made a sleepy reader feel more awake!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have no idea how much I love coffee. And thanks for write about it... It always feel good to read words about the things we like most.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Ode To Coffee, That Frivolous, Daunting Liquid
50 Shades To Cure Your Pain
An Open IV Right Into My Vein." - A good choice of Ode poem material. Some grammar things I noticed - you don't need to capitalize "that", "Daunting" and so on. Unless you've done it for aesthetic purposes. I notice that you've done it throughout the whole piece, so if It has a purpose - keep it. I applaud you're consistency.

"Ode To Coffee In All It's Dark Splendor
Flirting With Danger And Full Of Lust
Beckoning With Flavor, Each One Robust" - I don't usually care for a ton of rhyming in poetry, but I feel like the rhyming is not detrimental to the poems intent here. It's not distracting and I believe the words fit nicely.

"Ode To Coffee Without Which I'd Be Dead
My Cup Is Ready And Awaiting Your Hue
Au Revoir Until Then, I Bid Thee, Adieu. " - I like the playful tone of the piece. It's easygoing and fun to read.

Overall, I like that the piece only lasts about a sip of said coffee. Interesting description and word choice. Great ending. Thank you for the read, write on.

-Rynn

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coffee, frivolous, daunting! Love the simplicity and the lightheartedness in this prose!

Flirting With Danger And Full Of Lust... So accurate, so known :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coffee is awful! :D Jk, I myself don't drink it. :D Amazing poem btw, :)
This can be related to many coffee lovers like the comments below :)
Keep it up!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Stacy (Anastasia) Purvis
Stacy (Anastasia) Purvis

Cincinnati *The Queen City*, OH



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