breathe

and maybe if you just found me, just told me how you feel, i could finally take the mask off.... ♥

quiet your mind, just be still now
theres no way to get around
all of the aches and pains.

everyone seems so interested
time in and time out shes tested
separate the truth from lies.

she parts her lips
lets the secrets slip
would you listen?
could you listen?
to her story

she screams
i wipe away these tears
masquerade my fears
hide the lies
so you wont worry for me my dear.
dont want to cause a scene
not ready to come clean
all i really need
is to breathe.

Author's Note

was this one any good? im not really sure, cuz i didnt spend much time on it, i just had a moment during math class and wrote it :) haha. so umm, rate and reviews would be wonderfull.. thanks :)

Reviews

[Skull]

Short and gets a point across. I liked it lots =]

[heido]

I liked this you poetry is progressing in style and techynique. Progress~!

[Ian]

Its good but i felt like it could make me more into it. dont get me wromg your poem is good you just have the potemtial to make your writing amazing. Still a good job.