If Love is Just Silly

If Love is Just Silly

A Poem by victoria
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just something for fun :)

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If love is just silly,
then weapons are dumb.
Forget ammunition,
shoot roses, not guns.

War harms the strongest,
peace mends the wounds.
If love is the weapon,
we'll be free soon.

© 2010 victoria


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victoria
this is really just for fun, it just kinda popped into my head. nonetheless, rates and reviews would be beautiful :)

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I really like this! There's nothing about this poem that doesn't work, and I think that you've done an amazing job in fitting everything together perfectly. This poem is full of truth and wisdom, and I think that everyone who reads this will take something away from it. :)
~PaperHearts

Posted 14 Years Ago


WAR! what the hell are we fighting for?

same today as it was when it was first screamed at the top of some poor hippies lungs! :)


good short.

l8r g8r
s.s.

Posted 14 Years Ago


awwww this is cute (:

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Really awesome poem. 100/100

Posted 14 Years Ago


Like a flower child you are....smiles
I liked it!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is amazing. I love the message behind it, and this is definately going into my favorites!
100/100 Great write!

--Jess:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Yeah I do like this, but I have to say. We will never see peace on this planet, it is because we our not ready to change as a whole. We change individually, which causes more problems. It surfaces mainly because we differ from the ones who do not support our idealistic thoughts. So it targets controversy within us, and we take it out on those who fail to understand. Yet all and all, this piece was very good.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow, I was working on a piece VERY similar to this theme last night off the top of my head. The message this poem sends is what I love and I lost how you turned a positive message into a wonderful write, thank you for sharing. I enjoyed this very much and I am beyond impressed that this writing of yours that just popped up in your head. Very well written but even a better message which I cannot understand. Loved this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


i like this if love was our weapon if it was every ones weapon then we would be all at peace and we could understand others better then just imposing our views on others we would rationalize instead good peice

Posted 14 Years Ago



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