A Poem by victoria

just... yea

feeling so blank
twisting eyes, 
crossing and spinning,
cant see whats in front of me
falling, falling, falling
needing, wanting, craving, begging,
for what?
confused, alone, cold 
like frost covered flowers,
wilting, wilting, wilting
sleepless nights
tired thoughts.
unable to think
unable to write
trying, trying, trying
the rest is just whatever
futile efforts.
turning to dust
thinking, thinking, thinking
imperfect, unfinished, unproductive
missing paper and pencil
head swelling
trying to write,

© 2010 victoria

Author's Note

so uhm yea. writers block sucks :/ but i decided i had to write something, so i did lol. im not gonna fix it or go over it or anything cuz its like 5:20 am and i havent slept, however ur welcome to suggest any changes, drastic or tiny. i think ill sleep now xD

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very nice a writers block yet turned out really cool i think

Posted 10 Years Ago

Great write! Inspired and relatable. :) I liked your use of repetition, and thought that it perfectly captured the struggle and frustration associated with writers block. This was a really unique take on the idea, and was executed really well. I loved the line about the frost covered flowers! Beautiful imagery, as always.

Posted 11 Years Ago

This was a good poem. I haven't really been able to write much. I really liked this poem though. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

"the rest is just whatever
futile efforts.
turning to dust
thinking, thinking, thinking

{jeez--this is a excellent free flowing poem--wow-really-magnificent!!!}


Posted 11 Years Ago

As soon as I read it, I thought it would do good as a song (Singers/Song writers/Musicians are lucky people *sigh*). The repetition worked out well too. But as I said, this would feel better as a song :)

Keep writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on July 23, 2010
Last Updated on November 25, 2010
Tags: blank, bland, writers, block, whatever



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