In the Dark

A poem....

In the dark

Of my room,

I sit alone,

Crying,

I’m all alone,

I have no one,

I’m a freak, they tell me,

I look down at the blood

Pouring from my arm,

I look at the scars from

Many times before,

I know I need help,

I know I need to stop,

But can’t when I don’t have your love

To hold me…

Reviews

[Silentnightmare♊]

I like the Poem my comment on the other persons review wasnt for this i like the poem its very meaningful.

[Olga Kisska]

Stupid Poem.... a poet told me about this page . it is not so bad that some dont know how to write i guesss ! l o l your MIW stories are awful . the poem calls you a freak . hhmmmmm

[David the writer]

That's rather rude. I beleive you're a worse writer! Where did she go wrong? If you knew how to write, you could write a review, which in a reveiw stating what's bad, and why it is, is a goal. You however told this writer they are horrible, but support this with nothing. You just royaly insulted this writer, and show no respect what so ever. Which btw, lol is an acronym, acronyms aren't to be spaced out.

[Olga Kisska]

LMAO BTW FO do they cut to the beat of their favorite song ? put a mature tag on it !

[Bound In Red]

That was insanely rude. I agree with David. you have insulted this writer when you can't even write a simple review even with some respect.

[David the writer]

Wait, cutting isn't anything to laugh at! They hurt themselves because it's releiving compared to the pain they're feeling. You on the other hand must "reveiw" *using that term VERY loose* to feel your writing *if you do, your grammar is a nightmare!* is at least good enough to be labeled amature. By the way, "FO" isn't a word.

[Silentnightmare♊]

You are a very rude person. Not only are you rude your STUPID you can't even write correctly why are you even here. The unintelligent shouldn't be here. You make me and every other good writer on here sick. You are a grand example on why the human race is not even worth the air we breath. People like you should be round up and drown like braindead livestock.

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

Powerful. I have these thoughts as well. Sometimes I even isolate myself in my room and just lay on my bed, thinking why I was even born.So I can relate to this. Thanks for posting this.

[}Echo{]

Yeah... Oh.. Thanks!

[scripted]

i no the feeling to feel that your not loved but you will get through what your going threw nice job opening up

[}Echo{]

Yeah... Thanks.

[James E. Peterson]

i could relate to this, Adriana. It's short but makes up for it in content.

[}Echo{]

Thanks.

[Sacha Davison]

It's almost painful to read some of your work for me, sometimes. Not that it isn't amazing! It burns an image into my mind of my ex-girlfriend and all she had been through before we had met; as well as what she's been going through lately. It pains me that I could have possibly caused such desperation in another human being that they would resort to such a tragic escape. Our dependency on others hinders us from thriving, ourselves.

[}Echo{]

Wow.. Yeah.. Thanks for reviewing. :)

[Damien Davison]

Very intense and powerful, I never want my daughter to have to go through these emotions, my heart goes out to anyone that does... Great job, thanks for sharing!

[}Echo{]

Yeah, it really sucks... Thanks for the review! :)

[marie]

i can't help but bask in awe at your writing style i can't even describe it in a few sentences and that is something that is hard for someone to do to me, i love the to the point personality you portray, but it still pushes the deeper meaning of what you are truly trying to say

[}Echo{]

Thank you so much! Thank you for all the wonderful reviews! :)

[marie]

no problem to you as well :) i love reading your work and hope one day that my work can at least come close to matching yours:)

[}Echo{]

Thanks so so much! That's really nice, and means so much to me! :)

[marie]

:) well its true :)

[}Echo{]

Thanks. :)

[marie]

no prob :)

[}Echo{]

:)

[ms. barrie]

This is an extremely enriched with emotional tragedy...conveying such in-depth pain that one feels needs some kind of release. wonderful flow, eloquently written poem. thanks for all your lovely reviews you left upon my writings. take care, and always be well :)

[}Echo{]

Thanks. Thanks for the review! :)

[Randall Stone]

Hi Adriana, this was so moving and deep. You really give a feel for the tragedy that some poor lost souls know only as life. A powerful piece Princess. Love and Hugs. xxx

[}Echo{]

Thanks a lot! :)