In the Dark

In the Dark

A Poem by }Echo{
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A poem....

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In the dark

Of my room,

I sit alone,

Crying,

I’m all alone,

I have no one,

I’m a freak, they tell me,

I look down at the blood

Pouring from my arm,

I look at the scars from

Many times before,

I know I need help,

I know I need to stop,

But can’t when I don’t have your love

To hold me…

© 2012 }Echo{


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I like the Poem my comment on the other persons review wasnt for this i like the poem its very meaningful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Stupid Poem.... a poet told me about this page . it is not so bad that some dont know how to write i guesss ! l o l your MIW stories are awful . the poem calls you a freak . hhmmmmm

Posted 6 Years Ago


Bound In Red

6 Years Ago

That was insanely rude. I agree with David. you have insulted this writer when you can't even write .. read more
David the writer

6 Years Ago

Wait, cutting isn't anything to laugh at! They hurt themselves because it's releiving compared to th.. read more
Silentnightmare♊

6 Years Ago

You are a very rude person. Not only are you rude your STUPID you can't even write correctly why are.. read more
Powerful. I have these thoughts as well. Sometimes I even isolate myself in my room and just lay on my bed, thinking why I was even born.So I can relate to this. Thanks for posting this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


}Echo{

6 Years Ago

Yeah... Oh.. Thanks!
i no the feeling to feel that your not loved but you will get through what your going threw nice job opening up

Posted 6 Years Ago


}Echo{

6 Years Ago

Yeah... Thanks.
i could relate to this, Adriana. It's short but makes up for it in content.

Posted 6 Years Ago


}Echo{

6 Years Ago

Thanks.
It's almost painful to read some of your work for me, sometimes. Not that it isn't amazing! It burns an image into my mind of my ex-girlfriend and all she had been through before we had met; as well as what she's been going through lately. It pains me that I could have possibly caused such desperation in another human being that they would resort to such a tragic escape. Our dependency on others hinders us from thriving, ourselves.

Posted 6 Years Ago


}Echo{

6 Years Ago

Wow.. Yeah.. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Very intense and powerful, I never want my daughter to have to go through these emotions, my heart goes out to anyone that does... Great job, thanks for sharing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


}Echo{

6 Years Ago

Yeah, it really sucks... Thanks for the review! :)
i can't help but bask in awe at your writing style i can't even describe it in a few sentences and that is something that is hard for someone to do to me, i love the to the point personality you portray, but it still pushes the deeper meaning of what you are truly trying to say

Posted 6 Years Ago


}Echo{

6 Years Ago

Thanks. :)
marie

6 Years Ago

no prob :)
}Echo{

6 Years Ago

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This is an extremely enriched with emotional tragedy...conveying such in-depth pain that one feels needs some kind of release. wonderful flow, eloquently written poem. thanks for all your lovely reviews you left upon my writings. take care, and always be well :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


}Echo{

6 Years Ago

Thanks. Thanks for the review! :)
Hi Adriana, this was so moving and deep. You really give a feel for the tragedy that some poor lost souls know only as life. A powerful piece Princess. Love and Hugs. xxx

Posted 6 Years Ago


}Echo{

6 Years Ago

Thanks a lot! :)

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Added on November 27, 2012
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Tags: blood, selfharm, alone, room, dark, you, love, miss, crying

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