In the Dark

In the Dark

A Poem by }Echo{
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A poem....

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In the dark

Of my room,

I sit alone,

Crying,

I’m all alone,

I have no one,

I’m a freak, they tell me,

I look down at the blood

Pouring from my arm,

I look at the scars from

Many times before,

I know I need help,

I know I need to stop,

But can’t when I don’t have your love

To hold me…

© 2012 }Echo{


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OHHH.......... thats so nice and emotionally strong! loved it

Posted 7 Years Ago


}Echo{

7 Years Ago

Thanks. :)
the words was simple yet it was able to induce a strong mood into the reader. Great piece.

Posted 7 Years Ago


}Echo{

7 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
Brief but speaks volumes. Like how the last sentences draws everything in smoothly. Nice work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


}Echo{

7 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
wow. powerful. you really feel for the girl in the poem. good job

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on November 27, 2012
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Tags: blood, selfharm, alone, room, dark, you, love, miss, crying

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