Attention W***e

Attention W***e

A Poem by Alias

I am lost without

My drug of choice

The sweet caresses

Of your voice

 

I ache for you

When you’re not there

Your hungry lips

And brazen stare

 

I yearn to feel

Your lusting hands

With every touch

My need expands

 

But you don’t see

How much I need

Your constant love

Inside of me

 

I send you kisses

I lay the bait

Then waste my day

and lie in wait

 

Well now I’m tired

Of needing you

Without your touch

I can start anew.

© 2017 Alias


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I think we all have a little of this disorder running through us, especially on sites like this. We write hoping someone will enjoy our words, when they do it just increases the need for more and when they don't it feels so bad coming down. I liked this, maybe my meaning is not correct because this poem could be pointed towards many things. Up front is feels like it is speaking of a love interest, but many things can be a love interest. I hear the Who song in my head as I read, See me, Feel me, Touch me, Heal me. Great poem.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Beautiful amazing metamorphoses I like it. Real and true in many ways

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful read, loved the rhymes and the feelings presented. Thanks for sharing this. AK

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2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

what an arresting title, caught my attention right away

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A pleasure to read and so well written:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is absolutely beautiful, I feel a lot of people can relate even though sometimes that is not a good thing. Your words painted a vivid picture so beautifully written. Great job!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Too much longing is not a good thing...sometimes walking away and recreating yourself is the thing to do. Well written. Lydi**

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

definitely can relate to this. amazing job!

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1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This says some powerful stuff in a way that makes my thoughts circulate..love it
1000 points

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

This poem is spectacular, but I have two questions, the first being why that title? It misrepresents in a degrading way the want and passion of your poem. The second question is why break up the sentences as you posted it when it reads so great whole sentence by sentence? I want to thank Poison for sending me the read request for this poem, it was a pleasure to read :~)

I am lost without my drug of choice
The sweet caresses of your voice
I ache for you when you’re not there
Your hungry lips and brazen stare
I yearn to feel your lusting hands
With every touch my need expands
But you don’t see how much I need
Your constant love inside of me
I send you kisses I lay the bait
Then waste my day and lie in wait
Well now I’m tired of needing you
Without your touch I’ll be born anew.

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Alias

4 Years Ago

I'm not sure why I structured it as I did, that's just kinda how it came out! But I agree it works i.. read more
Bear

4 Years Ago

Therein is the issue, I didn't get that at all from your poem and if you have to explain something l.. read more
Alias

4 Years Ago

I think the title is a part of a poem, it doesn't just have to describe the content it also adds ano.. read more

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Added on December 8, 2015
Last Updated on January 29, 2017
Tags: love, romance, relationships, yearning

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Alias
Alias

Brighton, United Kingdom



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Poems that come out of my brain. I love to learn from others, so please review and let me know if you want me to read anything of yours, I have a million read requests so if there is a specific p.. more..

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