Attention W***e

Attention W***e

A Poem by Alias

I am lost without

My drug of choice

The sweet caresses

Of your voice

 

I ache for you

When you’re not there

Your hungry lips

And brazen stare

 

I yearn to feel

Your lusting hands

With every touch

My need expands

 

But you don’t see

How much I need

Your constant love

Inside of me

 

I send you kisses

I lay the bait

Then waste my day

and lie in wait

 

Well now I’m tired

Of needing you

Without your touch

I can start anew.

© 2017 Alias


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I think we all have a little of this disorder running through us, especially on sites like this. We write hoping someone will enjoy our words, when they do it just increases the need for more and when they don't it feels so bad coming down. I liked this, maybe my meaning is not correct because this poem could be pointed towards many things. Up front is feels like it is speaking of a love interest, but many things can be a love interest. I hear the Who song in my head as I read, See me, Feel me, Touch me, Heal me. Great poem.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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What i love about this poem:1)the passionate love you have shown
2)a deep longing for the person(lover)
3)a message to the lover
4)choice of words
5)beautiful poetic mastery with simple yet powerful way of expressing the whole poem....Great work mate....Thumbs up!!!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

A marvelous creation. Absolutely beautiful. Explains so much about lust and needs and passion.

Posted 4 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow this is so beautiful, sad, touching, and heartbreaking. Wonderful read absolutely loved it!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

*GASP* Oh my goodness! I love this!! *Exhales* This is what every women fail to admit (: Very well written darling (:

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very lovely! I loved your word choice and how this is conveyed. :D I sent out some RR's for you just like I promised.

Posted 4 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alias

4 Years Ago

Thanks babe I owe you x
McBear

4 Years Ago

Hehe. You owe me nothin c;
I liked the honest and direct words.
"I yearn to feel
Your lusting hands
With every touch
My need expands"
I like the need to expand dying down to being born anew. I believe hard to do. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I guess at times, we all have our drug of choice...
Transforming from a w***e into the goddess, from seeking attention to commanding it... It has begun.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Alias

4 Years Ago

I hadn't considered it a transformation as such, more as just getting frustrating - but I like 'w***.. read more
 David Scott

4 Years Ago

When we voice our needs we can confront them... I'm learning this myself...
Smooth! Captivating...
You might like to read my poem 'Bitterness'...
In any case, well done!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

a sad but common ending nowadays.

Posted 4 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 8, 2015
Last Updated on January 29, 2017
Tags: love, romance, relationships, yearning

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Alias
Alias

Brighton, United Kingdom



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