Phantom Man

I let the music infuse me,

it seeps into my skin and fills me with fire.

First we are slow and sweet

Gentle kisses, soft caresses

I slide my hands over my naked body

Hips, thighs, chest and neck,

Lightly

 

The breath of my touch lingers

My pale flesh makes subtle seizures

Goosebumps rise, insistent

Straining to retain the touch

I hold myself, squeeze myself

Eyes closed I see you

Seeing me

 

We change with the music,

Intense and deep and passionate

You fill me with your lips

And blow your life-force into me

I slide my hand down

And expertly you pleasure me

Fiercely

 

I writhe and move possessed

With you, who hold me

Firmly, wantonly, and wet

My smile is savage,

My hair’s a mess, and then

I shudder in total ecstasy

Utterly

 

I lie sated in your arms

We fall asleep hands clasped

Your breath against my neck

I wake to find you gone again

Phantom man, I’ve not yet met

And then I sleep, alone this time

Fitfully

Reviews

[David Scott]

Reality can be far more pleasing than any fantasy. Your poetry reveals a sensual mind and leads the reader to explore their own fantasies.
Although, I read a true longing for satisfaction, I suspect you are learning to be whole without your phantom... Thus your poetic sensuality finds voice.
Lovely write.

[Armanis]

I will write my review based purely on the poem itself, not the content. The lines flow beautifully with one another. It is well written. It has a very pleasant rhyme scheme leaving us with powerful images, and wanting...feeling with the narrator.

The only reason I refuse to write on the specific content is because it is a subject often written about too much.

[Scheherazade]

Very provocative and sensual and your language is so pretty and immersive, I can't help but like it. Good work.

[Leon C]

Very evocative and arousing. A sensual trip to a steamy place that sadly turns out to be cold and lonely. Beautifully writing. I am in awe of your skills.

[Terry O'Leary]

A very stimulating exposé... whew... what a ride!
Well done!!

[Quinn]

Beautiful poem with lots of wonderful form and rhythm to it x

[Richard🖌]

LOL!
MMmmm, Dear Poetess,
You've made it all seem and feel sooo good, I am beginning to fantasize I'm the Phantom Man, and I love it!

Vivid poetry is a great turn-on for me, and when it is spoken so sweetly, so warmly, so appealingly, and enthrallingly alluring, it is even more inspiring for me to lose touch with all around and join You … now, "that's" amazingly satisfying, and to think, your shared passions through your poetry made it possible for all that to happen!

What a heavenly thought it is, that such a lady would dream this delightful wonderment about me … well, one can imagine, eh? ; )

Thank you you ever-so graciously and gratefully for the pleasure of sharing You! ⁓ Richard


100/100

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Phantom men never cheat and are always there when they are needed :) BUT us women tend to like messy complications, don't we ??? Very intimate and seductive my dear

[Alias]

haha I like that, agreed my phantom is so much easier to get along with ;) x

[Chris]

Heat and presence and ...so easy to relate with...

[Southern_Writes]

Wow, very intense and beautiful imagery. Not in a sexualized way either, but in a raw, human need for love and touch. To please ourselves is not as satisfying as to the yielding release of a lover.