Rather

Rather

A Poem by Alias

I rather think I love you.
Rather?
Rather.
Yes.
Yes what?
You too.
Me what?
What you said.
What did I say?
How you...
How I love you.
Yes
Say it, I love you...
Yes, you too
I. Love. You.
Right back at you.
Come on say it.
I rather...
Yes?
Think I might be...
That's it,
Very much...
Come on,
In love.
With who?
With you!
Who is?
I am!
In what?
In love, I am in love with you!

© 2016 Alias


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for some saying i'm sorry or saying i love you, or saying i was wrong...just as difficult...

why are the words so hard to make emerge?
the feelings are often there...but we don't say it...and then the other is gone.

i "rather" hope it would be said.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Nice idea here. We often find it difficult to say what we really feel. That's relatable to me. Loved reading it :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


I loved the call-and-response that went on in this piece. Lovely!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Nice flow of thoughts in the poetry. Better to seek love than escape. I liked the ending a lot. Being in love is the best days of our life. Thank you Alias for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


I guess that's how it is sometimes. It can be hard to say those 3 little words because when we do we put it all out there on the line and risk being hurt or not getting a return. Makes us vulnerable & that's uncomfortable but someone has to take that first step i guess. Nice job.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Some things are very much hard to admit or say.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Really cute piece here Alias. Made my morning :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

for some saying i'm sorry or saying i love you, or saying i was wrong...just as difficult...

why are the words so hard to make emerge?
the feelings are often there...but we don't say it...and then the other is gone.

i "rather" hope it would be said.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i guess some people you just have to pry it out

Posted 3 Years Ago


I liked the way the lines were short and had a fast flow - it created a great beat for the poem. Glad I read :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely written dialogue!!! Beautiful

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 9, 2016
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Tags: romance, love, i love you

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Alias
Alias

Brighton, United Kingdom



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Poems that come out of my brain. I love to learn from others, so please review and let me know if you want me to read anything of yours, I have a million read requests so if there is a specific p.. more..

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