The Nobody

I'm wrapped in my own blanket of fear.
Some say I'm an image of King Lear.
I spilled my heart out today.
I was scared of what you'd say.
You didn't laugh at my feelings.
Staring up at my blank ceiling,
For first time knowing I'm a nobody.
Begging to become and any-body.
I hope you come back,
But my growing fears bring a panic attack.

Reviews

[Alicia Schroeder]

Great write.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe its cute. :) I really think it is still powerful though it is short. I loved it though. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Lilly]

Nice poem - short and sweet with a fun rhyme scheme.

[Keli Renee]

This is absolutely adorable, and yet I can totally relate to this.
Like girl with a pencil said, there are a few errors, but besides that, this is great.

[Flo]

its...cute....for some reason. some errors here and there, but somehow, reminds me of a child. keep working ^-^ i bet your gonna be great