When I'm Gone...

When I'm Gone...

A Poem by Jill Wallflower
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100% fictional. Its kind of self-explanitory.

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When I’m gone, will you miss me?
When I’m gone, will you move on?
When I’m gone, will you cry?
When I’m gone, will you laugh?
When I’m gone, will you die inside?
When I’m gone, will you be heartbroken?
When I’m gone, will you be with ‘her’?
When I’m gone, will you forget me?
When I’m gone, will you be depressed?
When I’m gone, will you feel relieved?
When I’m gone, will you see that it’s your fault?
When I’m gone, will you get rid of ‘her’?
When I’m gone, will you destroy my letters?
When I’m gone, will you destroy all of my songs?
When I’m gone, I hope you feel pain
When I’m gone, I hope she sees your faults
When I’m gone, she should leave you
When I’m gone, I hope you have no-one
When I’m gone, I hope you feel the pain I felt
When I’m gone, I hope you miss me
When I’m gone, I’ll NEVER miss you
When I’m gone, I’ll have no chance to miss you
When I’m gone, you’ll never see me again
When I’m gone, I’m never coming back...

© 2011 Jill Wallflower


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Repetition made the poem stronger. Funny part we won't forget the people who were kind to us. People who lived life with the goal of love and kindness will always be remembered. A excellent poem. Made me think this early morning. Thank you.
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Jill Wallflower
Jill Wallflower

Sydney, Australia



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I'm Jill 16 Christian :) Bisexual Yeah, I know they disagree but you can't choose who you become Music is my life... Northie, The Never Ever, Dear Dearest, Call The Shots, Because They Can.. more..

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